Joerachi Posted August 20, 2011 Author Share Posted August 20, 2011 (edited) Y U GAIZ NO CRITIQUE D: Edited August 20, 2011 by Joekitty Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 The latest one is really good! The only thing is that his neck seems kinda long. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 Hmm, the darkest shade around the bangs seem kinda thick and it also ends abruptly so it kinda doesn't seem right. It needs some more shading on where it meets the skin as well, though how to do that without looking pillowy, idk. Someone else might know that. I think the head angle and body angle seem weird. Try adding some shading on the right side of his torso, opv. It might give more of an impression that it is turned some more to the side. I also think the top right of his shoulder could use a bit more shade on it because of how the left shoulder is shaded. =] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 The shading where the hair meets the head looks awkward; the hair has no outline and there could afford to be a few spots of the fourth skin shade. I agree with Aviv that the neck is a bit too long and skinny, cut off a few pixels and it'll be fine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 (edited) The latest one is really good! The only thing is that his neck seems kinda long. That Klein base always comes back to get me. Hmm, the darkest shade around the bangs seem kinda thick and it also ends abruptly so it kinda doesn't seem right. It needs some more shading on where it meets the skin as well, though how to do that without looking pillowy, idk. Someone else might know that. I think the head angle and body angle seem weird. Try adding some shading on the right side of his torso, opv. It might give more of an impression that it is turned some more to the side. I also think the top right of his shoulder could use a bit more shade on it because of how the left shoulder is shaded. =] Will do, thanks for that. Also, just using a darker shade manages to do that without pillowing :DDD The shading where the hair meets the head looks awkward; the hair has no outline and there could afford to be a few spots of the fourth skin shade. I agree with Aviv that the neck is a bit too long and skinny, cut off a few pixels and it'll be fine. Righto. Edited August 21, 2011 by Joekitty Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted September 18, 2011 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 Second page :DDD I'm pretty sure the Left of the cape can be improved greatly, so some tips on that would be super appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 That hair shading, it's so chunky and straight. And wth, why is there massive outline spam at the roots? And Joe You're dithering B| Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted September 19, 2011 Author Share Posted September 19, 2011 (edited) Shame on famiry lifted? Edited September 19, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted September 19, 2011 Share Posted September 19, 2011 The right side of the hair is better, hnnnnng , and now your roots have massive third shade overuse. And as a side note, the face is really long, vertically, and the eyes are very close together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefrocks Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 (edited) As far as "Kitty Ears" is concerned, I think you need to move the left (EDIT: OPV) ear behind the head. It adds depth and reminds the viewer that his head is tilted a little to the side. You might want to consider joining the left (OPV) ear to the rest of the hair in some way, but this is the best I could do with my limited artistic ability in 2 minutes using MS Paint. My attempt at a FTFY: Edited April 12, 2012 by beefrocks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 (edited) Your attempt has been JPEG'd :V Always save as PNG. and really, he could just look at my avatar if he wanted a good enough example Edited April 10, 2012 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefrocks Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 (edited) Your attempt has been JPEG'd :V Always save as PNG. and really, he could just look at my avatar if he wanted a good enough example Crapitty crap-crap. I should've remembered that from when I edited sprites before. Two whole minutes in MS Paint waisted wasted. Well, that was my first post ever, so I guess I'll play the "I'm a stupid n00b" card right now and see where that gets me. Here's a retry: Oops. I was playing with the image and suddenly discovered a problem with my edit. Third time's the charm, right? Here's my next go: Edited April 12, 2012 by beefrocks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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