Masterplan201 Posted January 29, 2011 Share Posted January 29, 2011 (edited) Fire Emblem Redemption I'm Masterplan201I'm from Germany/Poland so sorry for my EnglishThis is my first Fire Emblem hack Storyline: Sorry but I'm currently working on the Storyline so I just show you a little part of it in some Screenshots Screenshots: New Old:[spoiler=x][ : Videos: Old: Fire Emblem Redemption Old Intro Credits: Tools: Nintendolord,Blazer,Xeld,Flyingace24, If i forget someone please contact me Special Thanks: Blazer- For his AWESOME Ultimate TutorialGeneral Archibald-For his AWESOME Bootcamp Information: 1)If you would like to be a character in the game just send me a good portrait and some informations it would save me some time and i think it would make more fun for you if you play the game buti can't promise that everyone could be in it 2)Just because i finished a chapter that means im not gonna some things in the future I want to make a really good game and i want to finish this but i'm a perfectionist so I don't want tom make a simply Fire Emblem hack, I want to make a hack like Tactic Universe :D Post 19 are some important informations!! Edited February 13, 2011 by Masterplan201 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted January 29, 2011 Share Posted January 29, 2011 You say you have trouble with english, but you've got custom maps, events, etc. That's awesomeness. And you included the chapter names in screenshots; nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masterplan201 Posted January 29, 2011 Author Share Posted January 29, 2011 You say you have trouble with english, but you've got custom maps, events, etc. That's awesomeness. And you included the chapter names in screenshots; nice. Thanks I worked really hard on it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masterplan201 Posted January 29, 2011 Author Share Posted January 29, 2011 Sorry for the double post but i got progress that i would like to share with everyone Fire Emblem Redemption Intro It's not much but it's anything :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whase Posted January 29, 2011 Share Posted January 29, 2011 I see you have green units in prologue and chapter 1? okay, now I really wanna play this! :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masterplan201 Posted January 29, 2011 Author Share Posted January 29, 2011 I see you have green units in prologue and chapter 1? okay, now I really wanna play this! :3 They are week but they fit in the story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 I think I get what you're trying to say in the character descriptions. I can help you with grammar, story-wise and otherwise. For Zack, it should say this: "One of the strongest mercenaries who is out for revenge. Kaz's older brother." If I knew a bit more about him, I could probably word it better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 If you're not good with English, I can deal, but, PLEASE, learn to put a period at the end of a sentence. You know, that little dot? The mugs aren't THAT bad (though, Kaz's neck is horrifying), custom events and maps are decent, and... Yeah. Keep on truckin'. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Red Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 ^At least it has custom events and maps. Blazer approves of this hack. But I'd approve of it more if you had someone help you with the grammar and map shading and spriting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masterplan201 Posted January 30, 2011 Author Share Posted January 30, 2011 I updated the portrait a little I can not deciede with the story please help :( Story 1: As Kaz and Zack were young their parents were killed in front of them so Zacks rage gave him power to defeat the bandits but after that he's was crazy and wanted to hurt others like they who killed his parents but Kaz wanted to continue the legacy of his father and help the people Story 2: As Kaz and Zack were young one day Kaz suddenly wake up because he heard screams.He went quickly check. As he arrived he saw a bloody Zack with a sword over their dead parents then Zack fled.Years later as Kaz were strong enough he hunted for Zack That's all for now please enjoy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 The second one. If you can lay out the plot events well enough, you have the makings of something great. Please give Zack a good reason for going berserk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masterplan201 Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 The second one. If you can lay out the plot events well enough, you have the makings of something great. Please give Zack a good reason for going berserk. Thanks I'm currently working on a mix between the 2 storys and update some portraits, maps and writing errors. Unfortunatly i did not have so many ideas for some characters but that shouldn't be a great problem Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mekkah Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 What the above users said. Essentially making a new game with a new story is great, but the language is so poor, you should really get someone to proofread and fix your stuff. It will make it look much more professional. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masterplan201 Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 What the above users said. Essentially making a new game with a new story is great, but the language is so poor, you should really get someone to proofread and fix your stuff. It will make it look much more professional. Thanks, but where i get someone like that but i could make it better it's because i worked so fast and don't controlled good enough.I have seen some grammar errors where i was thinking "how stupid i am" , but now i take some time and trying to make all that better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 I volunteered a bit earlier in the thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Red Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 If you do happen to run out of ideas, don't let your characters be boring--steal ideas from other games or stories if need be. It might not seem as fun but at least the plot will be interesting, and rest assured, most games reuse plot concepts from before (because there's only so many ideas one can have before the ideas get too similar/too cliche/too boring). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masterplan201 Posted February 2, 2011 Author Share Posted February 2, 2011 I volunteered a bit earlier in the thread. oh i'm really sorry i thought it would mean something else,so that means when i'm finished i could sen it to you? If you do happen to run out of ideas, don't let your characters be boring--steal ideas from other games or stories if need be. It might not seem as fun but at least the plot will be interesting, and rest assured, most games reuse plot concepts from before (because there's only so many ideas one can have before the ideas get too similar/too cliche/too boring). No, don't worry i try for every singel character a own story but it's a lot harder than i thought, i have great respect from you work Blazer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted February 3, 2011 Share Posted February 3, 2011 It means that I'll look over whatever text you want to send me, and fix it as necessary. I'll probably have a lot of questions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viceroy Posted February 4, 2011 Share Posted February 4, 2011 No, Kaz, you are the zombies. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masterplan201 Posted February 13, 2011 Author Share Posted February 13, 2011 BIG UPDATE * I restarted the game because the old one wasn't so good , but i think it's a lot better now! My grammar is better now since i don't use Google Translator! (but not perfect) Google Translator translated almost every 2 word wrong! I know the pictures do not say very much Currently i'm working on 2 projects Fire Emblem Redemption and Dragonball Z Tactics (Fire Emblem but with Dragonball animations) I think I would need a lot help with this but i already have all the animations for the hack, i attached one of them. The animations don't look like Fire Emblem animations but i think they are pretty good. The story is after Dragonball GT and it's based of Dragonball AF Enjoy please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 Your grammar's improved quite a bit! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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