Masu Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 Is that about my story? Or how I stopped the fight?If it's about my story, at least wait till I put the episode up before making a generic inauthentic response about it. Better than saying nothing and then you dont know who read it yet. Hence why i put *adds comment so lyle knows i read* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 There's also something...Nobody would be impressed by another person's looks if I'm around. But meh, it's your story... Lol. They we're more impressed by his bravery Nightmare. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 It was about stopping the fight. lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 Better than saying nothing and then you dont know who read it yet. Hence why i put *adds comment so lyle knows i read* I would prefer if you mentioned something you like about the story, and perhaps some criticisms so I can improve on my skills. It was about stopping the fight. lol. Okay. I was just making sure. I mean, I know you want to boost your postcount as of right now, but commenting on how good an episode I didn't write yet is a little much. Lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 No, I have precognition. Lol. And enough about the postcount, I've decided to stop caring for a while. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songbird Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 Awesome! I read enough of your history to be able to connect the Sephiroth plot. Great twist, Lyle! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 Awesome! I read enough of your history to be able to connect the Sephiroth plot.Great twist, Lyle! Twists are about the only thing I can do properly. Lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cymbeline Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 Nice part. I thought it was interesting. I wonder what will happen to Branded. XD Nice job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desdemona Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 Oh noes! I got held hostage for five seconds! :o Branded! How could you! XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 16, 2008 Author Share Posted July 16, 2008 (edited) By the way, that's who Brilliant Dynamites Neon is. If you ignore Vash standing in front of him. Believe it or not, that's the best picture of him I could find. Edited July 16, 2008 by Lyle Dayek Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 Kiryn: Please leave Nyrik out of the story. Wait wut? Kiryn: No, I'm serious, she'd mess everything up. hey! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 16, 2008 Author Share Posted July 16, 2008 Kiryn: Please leave Nyrik out of the story.Wait wut? Kiryn: No, I'm serious, she'd mess everything up. hey! I actually did plan on leaving her out. I think I've messed in you two's conflict enough as is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 Kiryn: THANKS!!! (I hope he heard me...) Hmph whatever, I'll go cause chaos elsewhere. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 16, 2008 Author Share Posted July 16, 2008 Episode 6: Shit *Non-existence.* Branded Blade: (Oh man, what have I gotten myself into? I’m so screwed.....) Sephiroth: Ho. It appears I found our way out. Branded Blade: Huh? *They look ahead to see a thick line of white light. Branded Blade assumes it the same sort of pathway they used to get to the planes. Sephiroth cuts it open with his blade and throws Branded Blade inside before plunging in himself.* *With the 11th squad members and Damon.* Damon: Huh. Where are we now? Kenpachi: Dunno. So long as there are good people to fight I’m happy. *A man in a red trenchcoat pops out a nearby tavern. He has yellow spikey hair. He spots Damon.* Damon: Eh? Oh. Hey Vash! Vash: O_o *Runs.* Ikkaku: Friend of yours? Damon: Huh. I guess he remembers the last time we met. Kenpachi: Eh? What’d you do to him. Damon: Oh, I threatened to kill everyone and everything he holds dear. Kenpachi: ........ Damon: Well he was holding back in a fight! It was justified! Yumichika: *Sigh.* How unsightly. Damon: Can’t you say anything that isn’t shallow? *Bad Lad’s ship. The group sits atop of the deck aboard the ship. Princess Kilvas is staring into space.* Bianchi: Worried about Masu? Princess Kilvas: Huh? Oh.....yeah I am. I wonder if he’s okay.... Bianchi: I’m sure he is. I know what it’s like to not know where someone you care about is. Princess Kilvas: I know. I’m sure we’ll find both of them. Bianchi: *Smiles.* Songbird: *walks over to them.* You know, you’re not the only one who misses my brother. Bianchi: True, but at least you have Fireman here. Songbird: *blushes.* Shut-up.... Bianchi: XD Princess Kilvas: Though it must be nice to not have him harassing you constantly. Songbird: True. It is nice. Kiryn: Well at least you all have someone who cares for you somewhere. I’ve got nobody. Songbird: What about Arc? Kiryn: EH?!? I HATE Arc! Bianchi: You know they say denial is the step before acceptance! Princess Kilvas: XD Songbird: XD Kiryn: *Fireman interrupts.* Fireman: Hey. What’s that? Princess Kilvas: What’s what? *Fireman points. There’s a streak of light heading for the ground ahead of them. The ships slows as the object hits the ground and causes a crater to form.* Knife: What the hell is that? Kiryn: It looks like a person! Arc: I think there’s two. But one’s definitely bigger than the other. Neon:*On loudspeaker.* We don’t know what that thing is, but we’re gonna check it out. *The ship slows to a stop.* Fireman: Let’s go check it out. *The group gets off the ship. As the look down into the crater, they see the two people in there.* Bianchi: Hey....is that-? Princess Kilvas: Branded Blade?! Branded Blade: !! RUN!!! *Sephiroth takes to the sky.* Sephiroth: I am Sephiroth. And I have come here to eliminate all that exists. We must start this world anew. And I shall be the destructor of this one. Arc: Well fuck. *11th Squad.* Damon: *Perks up.* Ikkaku: Eh? What’s wrong with you? Damon: (This scent! That’s that Princess’ scent! What the hell is she doing here!?!?) *He runs off.* Kenpachi: Hoy! Damon! Where the hell are you goin?! Yachiru: DAMONY!!! Yumichika: Shall we follow him? Kenpachi: Eh. *Back with Sephiroth.* Fireman: Arc. Arc: Got it. *He shoots several arrows at Sephiroth, who merely cuts them with his sword.* Shit.... Bianchi: *Gets Branded Blade.* Are you alright? Branded Blade: Yeah, no time for explanations though. We have to get out of here. This guy’s way too strong. Kiryn: .....I can’t believe it.....It’s Sephiroth..... Knife: You know him? Kiryn: Er. No....*Shoots an arrow at him, which like Arc’s arrows, he cuts through.* Damn. Sephiroth: Please. You fools can’t defeat me. Stop trying to delay your deaths. *He swoops down and aims to impale Princess.* Princess Kilvas: !!!! *In an instant, a foot makes contact with Sephiroth’s face, which sends him tumbling backwards.* Sephiroth: Grr... Damon: I am Damon Feath Settrock! The Demonic Conglomeration of the Demonclaw Syndicate! Nice ta meetcha! Princess Kilvas: Damon!? What are you doing here?!?! Damon: Questions later. I got plenty for you all to. But let me take care of the pretty boy first. Sephiroth: Heh. Ingrate. Damon: Actions speak louder than words guy. What’s yer name? Branded Blade: Sephir- Damon: I was askin him! Sephiroth: I am Sephiroth. Damon: Cool. That’s all I need. *He charges Sephiroth.* Princess Kilvas: Damon! *Sephiroth swings his blade at Damon. Damon kicks a patch of sand up and disappears* Sephiroth: Hm. Interesting. *Damon pops out of the sand behind Sephiroth and attempts to punch Sephiroth’s face. Sephiroth however grabs Damon’s hand before he does so.* Damon: Oh- *Sephiroth throws Damon.* SHIT!!!!!!! Sephiroth: *Charges for Damon.* Goodbye. *He readies his sword. Damon: *He kicks the sword and lands in the sand.* You ain’t killin me off yet! Sephiroth: Ho? *He moves with such speed that no one sees it until it’s too late. Sephiroth cuts off most of Damon’s left arm and his right hand. Then while Damon is still in shock, he stabs Damon through his chest.* Damon: Urk! *He falls to the ground. Princess Kilvas: Damon! Neon: *Wastes no time.* BAD LADS! SHOOT HIM! *The bad lads comply, but the bullets are ineffective against Sephiroth.* Damn.... Sephiroth: *Turns his attention to Princess Kilvas again.* Goodbye. Princess Kilvas: !!! (Masu....) *A spurt of sand, and Damon is standing in between Princess and Sephiroth again.* Sephiroth: Are you that eager to jump into your grave? Damon: Bastard..... Sephiroth: Wasn’t you that said ‘Actions speak louder than words’? Damon: Not you. I’m referring to the bastard that’s about to take my kill. Sephiroth: What? *Sephiroth gets knocked back again. This time by someone different.* ???: So this is why you left so quickly Damon. You sensed this strong guy and wanted to take him for yourself. Damon: Heh. Something like that... ???: Tch. You should know better than that by now. Sephiroth: Who are you? Kenpachi: Shinigami Captain of the Demonclaw Syndicate: Zaraki Kenpachi. To Be Continued: Next Episode: Treasure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songbird Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 Awesome! Damon vs. Sephiroth! And good thing I just finished reading your history, or I still wouldn't know who Kenpachi is. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 16, 2008 Author Share Posted July 16, 2008 Awesome! Damon vs. Sephiroth! And good thing I just finished reading your history, or I still wouldn't know who Kenpachi is. XD Lol. Kenpachi = Awesome. I suggest Bleach. You should read/watch it. If you haven't already. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liz Posted July 17, 2008 Share Posted July 17, 2008 lol! i'm the rescuer now! its turning out great! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! Now i know the secret of the planes! *goes out to other planes to conquer them* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 17, 2008 Author Share Posted July 17, 2008 lol! i'm the rescuer now!its turning out great! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! Now i know the secret of the planes! *goes out to other planes to conquer them* Lol. That's our Bianchi! *Steriotypical sitcom laughter in backround.* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 17, 2008 Author Share Posted July 17, 2008 What? Is there some sort of conspiracy going on that no one can comment on the new chapter other than Songbird and Bianchi? Geeze.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 17, 2008 Share Posted July 17, 2008 What? Is there some sort of conspiracy going on that no one can comment on the new chapter other than Songbird and Bianchi? Geeze.... Blame anime, and Video game's Lyle, blame anime and Video games *goes to look up Vampire Knight sig* Good part Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibari Posted July 17, 2008 Share Posted July 17, 2008 What? Is there some sort of conspiracy going on that no one can comment on the new chapter other than Songbird and Bianchi? Geeze.... I read but as I've said before, if I have nothing to contribute I won't post. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 17, 2008 Author Share Posted July 17, 2008 Blame anime, and Video game's Lyle, blame anime and Video games*goes to look up Vampire Knight sig* Good part I guess. Damn.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted July 17, 2008 Share Posted July 17, 2008 I read but as I've said before, if I have nothing to contribute I won't post. Exactly what he said, and I also said this before. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 17, 2008 Share Posted July 17, 2008 guess i need to continue doing what you said not to do. *posts to show that he read* But that bastard sephiroth. Why does he keep going for princess? Freaking loser. Aiming for the women first. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 17, 2008 Author Share Posted July 17, 2008 guess i need to continue doing what you said not to do.*posts to show that he read* But that bastard sephiroth. Why does he keep going for princess? Freaking loser. Aiming for the women first. See? that's the kind of comments I want. I like seeing what people think about certain things in the story. So long as it's nothing freaking out of nowhere crazy or spammy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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