ZemZem Posted October 29, 2013 Share Posted October 29, 2013 it always warms my heart when people post things like this out of the blue just for that i'll post the next chapter How many chapters do you have done currently? You must plan this ahead. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baldrick Posted October 30, 2013 Share Posted October 30, 2013 I'll admit I thought this was rather crude at the beginning, but it's really grown on me. The second best Thumbnail Theatre FE parody I have ever read. (I MUST know what happens in chapter 11 I can hardly bear the biding) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axie Posted October 30, 2013 Share Posted October 30, 2013 (edited) Between Merlock's retreat, taxidermied arms being thrown around, the cult of the boring and "turtling is a leegitimate strategy", this might have been the best thing I've ever got out of providing some feedback <3 Edited October 30, 2013 by Axie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Banzai Posted October 30, 2013 Author Share Posted October 30, 2013 How many chapters do you have done currently? You must plan this ahead. I'm currently halfway through Ch 11 I got some good Kempf material but then all of a sudden a wild school year appeared so I haven't had the chance to work any further A lot of the problem is I get a chapter written, but then formatting is a bitch so I sit on chapters for long stretches of time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axie Posted November 3, 2013 Share Posted November 3, 2013 Selphina absolutely cannot die her storyline is hilarious Also Nazi Safy lol <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZemZem Posted November 5, 2013 Share Posted November 5, 2013 oh my god Kempf holy shit I'm dying XD XD XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baldrick Posted November 7, 2013 Share Posted November 7, 2013 Le gasp! Fred used punctuation! Brolo shirt Fred needs to make more appearances. I'm really enjoying the Fin/Narrator interaction as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dondon151 Posted November 7, 2013 Share Posted November 7, 2013 hello i'm here to buy shiva's leg ring Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted November 7, 2013 Share Posted November 7, 2013 (edited) I hope that you will do Olwen and This-second-Mage-Knight-who-inever-recruit dialog. And that's awesome! Keep up good work! Edited November 7, 2013 by Nicolas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axie Posted November 8, 2013 Share Posted November 8, 2013 (edited) Oh my god 11x is probably the best chapter so far. The movie discussion slayed me and Kemp(u)f was hilarious and Fred's bro Ralph needs to be promoted (*bromoted) to the main cast now screw joining time Edited November 9, 2013 by Axie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garland Chaos Posted November 9, 2013 Share Posted November 9, 2013 The part with MissingNo. Anna was the funniest part of the fanfic so far, in my opinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doga Posted November 15, 2013 Share Posted November 15, 2013 Just read the latest chapter, having not read most of the work beforehand. It was pretty awesome, especially the screenshot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted November 29, 2013 Share Posted November 29, 2013 (edited) Almost moth passes since last update. Please, I want to see more. It's great! EDIT: LOL, Finn and Fred mugs are so similar. They have only different hair and chlotes. Edited November 29, 2013 by Nicolas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garland Chaos Posted November 30, 2013 Share Posted November 30, 2013 Like Nicolas, I really want to see more. Are you suffering from a case of writer's block? If so, I can help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Banzai Posted December 12, 2013 Author Share Posted December 12, 2013 Like Nicolas, I really want to see more. Are you suffering from a case of writer's block? If so, I can help. I've written Chapter 12 and it's not terrible but it's a step down from 11 The problem is I'm switching the perspective back to Rifis gang only to find they're all kinda lame Like Dalshin and Asvel, such comedy potential Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZemZem Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 I thought Lifis and Machua were both amazing, honestly. Fergus, too. I liked Karin, but she got kidnapped, so eh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolas Posted December 27, 2014 Share Posted December 27, 2014 OMG UPDATE!!!! I thought that was dead. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MacLovin Posted December 27, 2014 Share Posted December 27, 2014 I love this Banzai. Keep up the humor and good writing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-Naut Posted December 27, 2014 Share Posted December 27, 2014 what the fuck did i just read I died laughing at the Homeros invitation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted December 27, 2014 Share Posted December 27, 2014 Kempuf taking over ST was so funny Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZemZem Posted December 27, 2014 Share Posted December 27, 2014 Awesome as ever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chastlily Posted January 4, 2015 Share Posted January 4, 2015 I love it <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 Do you actually make up Homer's lines? He spits fire. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delphi Sage Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 @Banzai: You said earlier in this topic you did something similar to this for FEs 7, 8, 9 and 11. Do you know where I can find these? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Banzai Posted February 8, 2015 Author Share Posted February 8, 2015 Do you actually make up Homer's lines? He spits fire. Off the top yo @Banzai: You said earlier in this topic you did something similar to this for FEs 7, 8, 9 and 11. Do you know where I can find these? FE7UV no longer exists. It was on the Nsider forum, which went kaput for good in 2007, not even an archive remains. I wrote it when I was like 15 anyway so it's not very good. FESSUV is the only UV I've actually finished. The quality is pretty up and down. The site it's on, Nsider2, had some formatting overhaul at some point so apostrophes and other grammar markers look weird, but it's still readable. Once you get to Chapter 15 or 16, the quality ramps up majorly, and the final chapter is just epic. PoRUV assumedly still exists, as it's on the same board FESSUV is on. But I can't find it. I also didn't get very far on it, only to about Ch 7 or 8. I think what I did write is pretty good quality, but I had a lot of difficulty distinguishing myself from Radiance Theatre, which is basically the #1 FE parody of all time. Of all time. FESDUV is mostly finished. I got to Ch 20 I believe. The thing is, a lot of what happens in FESDUV is a direct sequel to what happens in FESSUV, so I'd recommend reading FESDUV first, or at least the final chapters of FESDUV. If I ever do an FE13UV, I plan to write the final few chapters of this in tandem with it. Fun fact, the currently in-development Chapter 15 of Thracia UV (I've already written 14x) has a joke that references FESDUV. I've generally abstained from refrance jokes in ThraciaUV but it fit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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