Fateborn Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 The body view feels wrong if you're using the wil's head as placeholder. Probably should flip it around. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted December 22, 2012 Author Share Posted December 22, 2012 I'm sorry, but could you explain why it looks 'wrong'? Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 The Light source. The armor is receiving it from our left. While Wil placeholder is receiving it from the right side. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted December 22, 2012 Author Share Posted December 22, 2012 Ah, okay. Well, it's just a placeholder. and so when I'm done it'll be right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 I dig the design and colors of that armor. The body looks incredibly small with Wil's head tho, even if it was a female head I'd still think that the body was too small :V As for the light source, I actually don't really see much of a consistent light source at all, maybe I'm crazy. It seems to be coming more from the front, which is not really a thing in FE sprites. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 Perhaps you should use someone with a similar pose to the one you want to do as a base. It seems like proportioning is probably your biggest issue, so if you started with a base pre-proportioned, it might make it easier for ya. The design itself is pretty kewl though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted December 23, 2012 Author Share Posted December 23, 2012 Done! Anything else that needs to be fixed? (And just wondering, was the previous color scheme better? Or is this one better?) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted December 23, 2012 Share Posted December 23, 2012 His chin could use some darkening, and yeah his shoulders could, I think, be a bit longer :P Looks pretty good, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted December 23, 2012 Share Posted December 23, 2012 I personally think he'd look better with his head going the other way :p I do like it though. Aside from tiny shoulders. Try drawing out the shoulders, as if he weren't wearing armor. (just to get an idea of size) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted December 24, 2012 Share Posted December 24, 2012 yeah the perspective's kinda derping his armour as well. Like I think you design and shade well but proportioning & perspective need some work :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted December 24, 2012 Author Share Posted December 24, 2012 Thanks for all the feedback everyone. Ok, so here's a WIP of the new version (on the right, obviously). Anything I should fix before moving on the the shading and stuff? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted December 24, 2012 Share Posted December 24, 2012 The shoulder pads could still use a little elongation, I think. Like look at the size of Sain's in comparison :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted December 25, 2012 Author Share Posted December 25, 2012 Old version on the left, for comparison. Hopefully it's done now. ...anything else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted December 25, 2012 Share Posted December 25, 2012 looks muuuuch better proportion-wise. :3 Kinda weirdness going on with the right OPV pad though... It just looks like it's sitting weirdly or something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted January 10, 2013 Author Share Posted January 10, 2013 Help. Mostly with trim (looks too...shiny), but anything else would be appreciated as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted January 11, 2013 Share Posted January 11, 2013 His eyes and nose are like way derp not sure how to help with trim though :S Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 12, 2013 Share Posted January 12, 2013 Agreed about eyes and nose. The trim is really pillow-shaded. That's what's bugging me about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted January 12, 2013 Author Share Posted January 12, 2013 Fixed it and edited it a bit. Does it look better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 12, 2013 Share Posted January 12, 2013 Much better on the trim. The eyes and nose look off-angle, that may be part of why it still looks off there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted January 12, 2013 Author Share Posted January 12, 2013 (edited) Fixed? Hopefully. Edited January 12, 2013 by risingSolaris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted January 12, 2013 Share Posted January 12, 2013 They're definitely looking better :P Question; that greyish colour part below his like, main armour piece; is that some kind of cool piece of cloth or something? Right now it looks like some sort of gaps in him, it might help if you made it a bit darker? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted January 12, 2013 Author Share Posted January 12, 2013 Hopefully I'm done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted January 12, 2013 Share Posted January 12, 2013 It's looking much better than when you started, now :)! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted January 17, 2013 Author Share Posted January 17, 2013 Help. With scars, clothing, necklace, and lots of other stuff (also need some good references or pointers for muscles). ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted January 25, 2013 Author Share Posted January 25, 2013 NOOOOOOORRRNNNNE!!! Left is to match the size of people from the GBA games (of her age), but right is her full FEDS replica. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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