Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 The shirt isn't really shaded by lightsource. There's a ton of the first shade and there's no definition of arms, breasts, shoulders, etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted January 20, 2013 Author Share Posted January 20, 2013 The shirt isn't really shaded by lightsource. There's a ton of the first shade and there's no definition of arms, breasts, shoulders, etc. okay. I'll try to do something about it. I'm not having much luck so far though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 Referencing existing sprites will help you. =) Also just note that her darkest hair shade is darker than the outline ever slightly, so you should lighten that a touch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted January 21, 2013 Author Share Posted January 21, 2013 i made some touch ups with my older works. i'm not sure if the nose looks better or looks more messy this time. here's the older version and update time I'm starting to get severely lost with this one. LOL. I'm also done with FC Vermillion update on FC Katherine. I made some changes with the eyes and structure as well as added the clothes. :) still working on Aidan. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 i gave up on her original hairstyle. :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted January 27, 2013 Author Share Posted January 27, 2013 updated stuff a new character base for a new character and another base. :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted January 27, 2013 Share Posted January 27, 2013 Is that last one Nobunaga? Anywho, the third one's left shoulder is a bit low, but that's probably the biggest flaw I see. Hair shading could be improved on the first two guys, but otherwise everything looks really nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted January 27, 2013 Share Posted January 27, 2013 Is that last one Nobunaga? Anywho, the third one's left shoulder is a bit low, but that's probably the biggest flaw I see. Hair shading could be improved on the first two guys, but otherwise everything looks really nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kramy Posted January 27, 2013 Share Posted January 27, 2013 Can't wait for the last guy, I can see he's going to look pretty cool XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted January 28, 2013 Author Share Posted January 28, 2013 Is that last one Nobunaga? Anywho, the third one's left shoulder is a bit low, but that's probably the biggest flaw I see. Hair shading could be improved on the first two guys, but otherwise everything looks really nice. Indeed it is. I've been wanting to sprite him for so long. Well, they're just bases I use for reference. I change them along the way. They're just guidelines. For the hair shading, Specifically what part needs tweaking? Can't wait for the last guy, I can see he's going to look pretty cool XD heh. damn you ponytail thingy for making shiz difficult. :/ Still working on the feathers... If only they weren't such a pain to make. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted January 31, 2013 Author Share Posted January 31, 2013 updates and new stuff : need crit on this aside from the trim shading. I tried changing the hair so it'd make more sense hair was giving me a bad time so I'm still working on it. fleshing out a little bit of his design. He's supposed to be wearing bandages inside that. Tristan, a cavalier. :) somehow his headshape(the jaw specifically) is still bugging me. I'm still a bit stuck with this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 Can you like finish something Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 (edited) Can you like finish something Don't be rude, April. The OP is allowed to work at his own pace and how he wants; your crude remake is unneeded. Edited February 1, 2013 by eCut Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 I'mma side with our disagreeably disgruntled emoticon friend: too many WIPs, all with the same angles and same mistakes. No progress is really being made here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted February 1, 2013 Author Share Posted February 1, 2013 Well actually, I only needed crit for the first one and the last since they're both almost finished except for a few things. I only added the others as like an update saying that I'm still working on them. I'm sorry if that caused a little argument. I ask for help in the process of making cause sometimes I'm a bit slow to notice things which is why I ask about things before they're complete. daaaaayuuuuuuuuuuuum. chill people. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 (edited) 1st one: shading beneath the hair is almost non-existent, and his eyebrows and eyes need some more anti-aliasing. There's far too much of the 5th skin tone being used and not enough of the rest. The shading under his eyes is too light, causing his irises to blend in with his face. There's too much sparkle. His nose is really wide. There's some unnecessary shading on his left eye which seems to outline the whites of his eyes or something? This isn't really animu so that's not necessary. His hair doesn't seem to have any depth... you've just drawn lines through it with the second hair shade, but that makes it look kinda weird. Last one: exactly the same issues. It looks like you used an FE8 colour for his eyes? But the rest of him is FE7 colours??? Either way, the darkest eye shade is darker than his pupil, so big no-no. Edited February 1, 2013 by Agro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted February 1, 2013 Author Share Posted February 1, 2013 and just a follow up, I do have a finished works and nobody commented on them so I thought they were alright. :/ 1st one: shading beneath the hair is almost non-existent, and his eyebrows and eyes need some more anti-aliasing. There's far too much of the 5th skin tone being used and not enough of the rest. The shading under his eyes is too light, causing his irises to blend in with his face. There's too much sparkle. His nose is really wide. There's some unnecessary shading on his left eye which seems to outline the whites of his eyes or something? This isn't really animu so that's not necessary. Last one: exactly the same issues. It looks like you used an FE8 colour for his eyes? But the rest of him is FE7 colours??? Either way, the darkest eye shade is darker than his pupil, so big no-no. hmmm... thanks. I was about to disagree about the nose thing but after zooming out, zooming in for a little while, I kinda see your point now. and by too much sparkle uhhh... where exactly? o_o and by left, meaning my left as I look at the screen? and no, I just used the same color as his clothes. o_o I'll try changing the colors then. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted February 1, 2013 Share Posted February 1, 2013 Sparkle as in the white dots at the tops of his pupils. The reflections. I did say his left, by the way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted February 1, 2013 Author Share Posted February 1, 2013 Sparkle as in the white dots at the tops of his pupils. The reflections. I did say his left, by the way. ah, sorry bout that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted February 3, 2013 Author Share Posted February 3, 2013 props to Agro for the help with this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted February 3, 2013 Share Posted February 3, 2013 I liked fat nose better than Paris Hilton nose I still feel you are missing the point of AA. Your edges on his face ( eye brows, chin, jawline) are all still rather jagged... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted February 4, 2013 Author Share Posted February 4, 2013 (edited) I liked fat nose better than Paris Hilton nose I still feel you are missing the point of AA. Your edges on his face ( eye brows, chin, jawline) are all still rather jagged... and I'll keep your points in mind. edit: nvm Edited February 4, 2013 by Acha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kramy Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 Anti-aliasing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted February 4, 2013 Author Share Posted February 4, 2013 Anti-aliasing yeah, I kinda figured that out a little too late. :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted February 4, 2013 Share Posted February 4, 2013 Neck shading is totally pillowy and off. Less of the fourth shade. Reference existing FE necks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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