Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 18, 2008 Author Share Posted September 18, 2008 Hika's totally awesome kill count so far: 2Nice chapter 3 you forgot Siegfried... It just had to be Hika that kills me.............. Super Baby... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noremaC Posted September 18, 2008 Share Posted September 18, 2008 Super Baby... it was totally worth it........ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 18, 2008 Author Share Posted September 18, 2008 New chapter soon. Like later today... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 18, 2008 Author Share Posted September 18, 2008 Chapter 12 (Wildlands) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=joHdhnf2lu8 Link: HOW DID WE LOSE! Yoshi: YOSH!!! Pit: Why did you attack us? Mario: YEAH ALL WE DID WAS DEFEAT THE ZELDA CLONE!!!! Yoshi: Yosh? Link: Zelda...Clone... Pit: YES! ZELDA, CLONE! Link: Yoshi: Yoshi... Navi: He called you an idiot. Link: Yeah...No translation needed. Mario: Well...now that we got that over with let's just go on with our buisness and... *WOOOOOSH* *A transport car drives by, with Stone versions of Luigi Peach and Ness* Mario: Luigi, PEACH!!! Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lg0Dwxc9UkA Mario: GET BACK HERE!!! Dedede: OH SNAP! Mario: GET BACK HERE!!! ???: POYO *A Sword Shaped Laser toasts Dedede's car* Dedede: THAT THERE KIRBY!!!! Kirby: Hiiii Dedede: *Drives Away* Mario: PEACH!!! Link: What just happened? Mario: That Penguin has Peach! Branded: Now that was a sentence I thought I'd never hear... Pit: there isn't time to save that Princess, we need to find a way to stop the Subspace. Mario: BUT PEACH! Pit: Alright...Mario, Branded, Link you go save that Princess lady. Mario: Yeah! Pit: Me, Yoshi, Princess and... Kirby: HIIIIIII Pit: ...And Kirby will go after the Primid Army... Link: How did I even get involved in this... Yoshi: Yoshi... Navi: You said it Yoshi... To be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 18, 2008 Author Share Posted September 18, 2008 (edited) I HATE this chapter damnit... Edited September 19, 2008 by Toa Lord Sothe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 19, 2008 Author Share Posted September 19, 2008 Could someone tell me if this is as bad as I think it is? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted September 19, 2008 Share Posted September 19, 2008 Could someone tell me if this is as bad as I think it is? Its not bad, but the first one posted is better. I like the funny memorable moments, this one was more descriptive, which was good too. *Throws Pit at Link* ROFL, I imagined it and it was funny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noremaC Posted September 19, 2008 Share Posted September 19, 2008 Its fine, and even if you don't think it is the greatest at least your doing somthing the earth wasnt made in 1 day :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 19, 2008 Author Share Posted September 19, 2008 Its fine, and even if you don't think it is the greatest at least your doing somthingthe earth wasnt made in 1 day :D I think Noremy just compared me to god... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noremaC Posted September 19, 2008 Share Posted September 19, 2008 I think Noremy just compared me to god... well you do control whether people die, live, or get ressercted :D *winkwink* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 19, 2008 Author Share Posted September 19, 2008 Chapter 13 (Bowser's Castle) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Sn9AimocZ4 Branded: Are you sure Peach is in here. Mario: We followed Penguin man here, he had Peach simple-a math. Link: Great another Castle. Branded: Oh screw it let's just storm the damn place! Mario: On the count of three... Branded: One...THREE *Runs at the Castle* Link: Moron... *Link and Mario run after Branded* Mario: It would-a seem there is-a no one home... Link: Okay then *Walks right in* ______________________________ (Ridley's Ship) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LJVi_502mlo Ridley: Alright men, were approaching Angel Island... Pat: Why, are we finally gunna lift that Master Emerald? Ridley: No VanDusan, we're going to save the Hunter's life... Rin: SAMUS!!! Pat: ARAN!!!! Masu: Who? Rin: OUR MORTAL ENEMY! Pat: YOUR MORTAL ENEMY!!! Ridley: THIS IS MY DAMN CALL AND YOU WILL OBEY ME!!! Pat: Yes sir... Rin: As you wish... Masu: Do I have a damn choice? Ridley: No. ___________________ (The Desert) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1QqdlXtTIjE Lucas: I think I'm safe...Ness....Damnit...Water...Water...Can't Breathe......*Faints* ???: Holy crap... ???: Squirtle...Water Gun. Squirtle: SQUIRT!!! *The turtle spits out a small lake* ???: Good Job... ???: Hey kid...Wake up! Lucas: Claus? Cluas? Cluas.... ???: C'mon *Drags Lucas over to the water* Lucas: Thank you... ???: My name is Red, Your going to be okay kid. Lucas: My name is Lucas... Red: Why was this kid in the desert? Squirtle: *Shrugs* ________________________________ (Wilds) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0HobbRxCW1Q Pit: Damn we lost him again... Yoshi: YOSHI!!! Princess: We'll never catch up with this Ancient Minister if we stand here complaining... Pit: Wait...Who are they? To be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 19, 2008 Author Share Posted September 19, 2008 Well I feel a little better about this chapter. what do you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HowAreYaBud Posted September 19, 2008 Share Posted September 19, 2008 It's good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 20, 2008 Author Share Posted September 20, 2008 Chapter 14 (Bowser's Castle) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d686H-rOU5o Branded: "Koops Message Board, We leave at 7 PM anything (or person) not packed and ready to go get's left behind" Mario: Then why would Dedede bring Peach here... Link: MARIO, BRANDED! Mario: Crap... *Stone Statues of Lugi, Ness and Dedede are all set up on some weird alter* Branded: Demonic... Link: Quite... Mario: But where is Peach... Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DTCVtDV6Yzc ???: WHY HELLO THERE MAY I INTEREST YOU IN A FINE COURSE OF YOUR IMMINENT DEMISE!!!!!! Mario: HUH! *Hit by a laser* Link: What the...? *Blasted by Machine-gun fire* ???: Egg Pawns, move in... Branded: Oh tits *Sips Sprite* *Draws Sword* ???: Feisty one aren't ya? Branded: Hey man your a little fat for this... ???: Oh but they aren't EGG PAWNS GO!!! Pawn1: PIMPIN' *Fires Machine-Gun at Branded* Branded: DIYAAA *Blocks with his Sword* Pawn2: SHOW ME YO MOVES *Fires Laser Pistol* Branded: *Rolls out of the way* *Stabs Egg Pawn* Pawn2: *Pulls out Lance* Branded: Crap, *Throws sword at Pawn* Pawn2: DOH *Explodes* Eggman: YOU AINT SEEN THE LAST OF ME *Flies off in the egg walker* Branded: Mario, Link are you okay? Link: My ego will never heal... Mario: Middle Tier my ass... _________________________ (Angel Island) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PlA0TIiCU0k Samus(In Power suit): Well that's over... Pikachu: PIKA! Samus: Wel now we to meet up with Meta and Ike in the Desert... Pikachu: PIKACHU!!!! Samus: What? *A Space Pirate Ship flies overhead* Samus: WHAT!!!! Pika: *Starts firing Lightning at the ship* Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MTsRIpgOp4s *Ridley and his posse fly down out of the Ship* Samus: *Starts Charging her Laser* Ridley: DON'T SHOOP DA WOOP ME, I COME IN PEACE! Samus: You have three minutes, Talk. Ridley: The Subspace Army has set a trap for you, this Island is going ot self destruct in 12 Hours. Samus: Bull, you just want me out of your hair while you hunt for the Master Emerald! Ridley: If that was true I would just kill you... Pat: That's true. Rin: Yeah. Masu: I have no idea... Samus: ... Alright say I believe you... Ridley: Yes? Samus: WHY ARE WE STANDING HERE THE WHOLE DAMN ISLAND IS GOING TO EXPLODE! _________________________________ (Hocotate Freight-5 Days ago) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XFk_rZx95tw Secretary: Captain Olimar the President will see you now. Olimar: Why thank you. *Olimar walks into the President's Office* President: Olimar meh boy! Olimar: Sir. President: I want you to go to this place called Angel Island, there is supposed to be great treasure there. Olimar: Sir it would seem that I do less and less shipping and more and more treasure hunting. President: GO!!! Olimar: Yes sir... President: Oh and you should go pick up your Pikmin on the way there. Olimar: Sir? President: Oh yes, this Planet has Oxygen. Olimar: NOOOOOOOOO _________________________________ (Angel Island-Present) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AB_LcD_GyPA Olimar: COME ON PIKMIN *Throws a Pikmin at a Giant ROB* Giant ROB: LOLWUT *Spins* Pikmin: AHHHHH Olimar: NOOOOOOOO Pikmin: Ehhhh... Olimar: What? Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xoCaXUo8EVg ???: FALCON PUNCH!!!! Giant ROB: OH SHI- *BOOM* *Giant ROB is seen flying into the distance* Olimar: :o Captain Falcon: Well little man, Show me your moves... Olimar: :o Falcon: Well then...What is your name little one. Olimar: My name is Captain Olimar. Falcon: And I am Captain Falcon. Olimar: Well...That's nice... _________________________ (The Great Fox) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6x6D_S6s4lU Krystal: We haven't seen Fox for weeks. Falco: He's fine, Me and Fox have rolled together since Third Grade, he aint the dying type. Slippy: But if he does die who' gunna save me? Falco: SHUT UP!!! Peppy: I haven't told Fox to do a barrel roll since the 64... Falco: SHUT UP DAMNIT I'LL GO LOOK FOR HIM!!! *Walks out to the Arwing Hanger* Slippy: Good acting Krystal. Peppy: You weren't half bad Slip. Falco(On Radio): I van hear you guys... To be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted September 20, 2008 Share Posted September 20, 2008 Yay! Good chapters! Keep it up! =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 20, 2008 Author Share Posted September 20, 2008 Yay! Good chapters! Keep it up! =D *Does Kirby Victory Dance* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted September 20, 2008 Share Posted September 20, 2008 President: Oh yes, this Planet has Oxygen.Olimar: NOOOOOOOOO lolNice chapter! Where am I Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 20, 2008 Author Share Posted September 20, 2008 lolNice chapter! Where am I You'll see. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 20, 2008 Author Share Posted September 20, 2008 Chapter 15 (Desert) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1QqdlXtTIjE Ike: Alright Meta, Me and Soren will sneak into the Ruins and lay the ground work for an attack, then you and Marth charge the place. Soren: Ike look... Meta: Two...Birds? *Princess and Pit flies in* Princess: Oh my god Soren *Hugs* Soren: HANDS OFF YOU SUB-HUMAN!!! Princess: Soren... Pit: Listen here, I'd try and think where I came from before I threw out racial slurs you half-breed son of a bitch!!! Marth: Ike who are these people? Ike: Princess what are you doing here, where are Masu and the others? Pit: You know these guys? Soren: Vaguely... Meta: What does this have to do with ANYTHING!! Soren: Nothing come on Ike let's go... Ike: Yeah, let's... *Ike and Soren head for the Temple* Meta: Why are you guys here? Princess: I thought I saw someone I knew... *Flies off* Pit: *Flies after Princess* Marth: What the hell was that? Meta: *Shrugs* _____________________________ (Desert) Pit: Are you okay Princess? Princess: Yeah...I wish Masu was here... Pit: Oh... (DAMMNIT!!!!) Princess: Yoshi, where did Kirby go? Yoshi: Yoshi? Princess: HE WHAT!!! __________________________ (The Desert) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_ysGxXIYIk Ancient Minister: Why did you follow me Pink one? Kirby: POYO (Your a bad guy like NME or King Dedede) Ancient Minister: Is that your only reason? Kirby: POYO (Do I need another? You do bad things, I do good things) Ancient Minister: then have at me *Fires Lasers at Kirby* Kirby: POYO!!! (FINAL CUTTER) *Throws a Cutter Sword shaped Beam at the Minister) Ancient Minister: AHHHH *Flies away* Kirby: NO FIGHT FAIR!!!! __________________________________ (Outside the Ruins) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0aFe7gvaOeo Red: Alright Lucas, my Poke'mon are in there. Lucas: Why would this robot guy want to take them? Red: I don't know, but I do know he's about to find a new meaning to pain! Lucas: Yeah, Ya know, I bet that's where Ness is to! Red: I'm sure he is to... __________________________________ (Angel Island) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LJVi_502mlo Ridley: Hurry onboard my ship! Samus: No, there are innocents on this Island, I won't just leave them... Ridley: I just risked my standing as a Pirate to save your life!!! Pat: Seriously he did, the entire crew is ready to mutiny. Ridley: Shut up Vandusan. Samus: And I thank you for it but I'm not leaving this islands inhabitants!! Pikachu: PIKA!!! Ridley: Fine damnit. Masu: I'm with her. Rin: Small dick basterd? Ridley: FINE! Rin Pat let's jet. Pat: Hell yeah. Rin: Good luck...Masu... Pat: Masu: Made an exception to the roller coaster rule have we? Rin: Oh fuck off. Samus: Come on, we only have 10 Hours left! To be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 20, 2008 Author Share Posted September 20, 2008 Chapter 15 (Desert) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1QqdlXtTIjE Ike: Alright Meta, Me and Soren will sneak into the Ruins and lay the ground work for an attack, then you and Marth charge the place. Soren: Ike look... Meta: Two...Birds? *Princess and Pit flies in* Princess: Oh my god Soren *Hugs* Soren: HANDS OFF YOU SUB-HUMAN!!! Princess: Soren... Pit: Listen here, I'd try and think where I came from before I threw out racial slurs you half-breed son of a bitch!!! Marth: Ike who are these people? Ike: Princess what are you doing here, where are Masu and the others? Pit: You know these guys? Soren: Vaguely... Meta: What does this have to do with ANYTHING!! Soren: Nothing come on Ike let's go... Ike: Yeah, let's... *Ike and Soren head for the Temple* Meta: Why are you guys here? Princess: I thought I saw someone I knew... *Flies off* Pit: *Flies after Princess* Marth: What the hell was that? Meta: *Shrugs* _____________________________ (Desert) Pit: Are you okay Princess? Princess: Yeah...I wish Masu was here... Pit: Oh... (DAMMNIT!!!!) Princess: Yoshi, where did Kirby go? Yoshi: Yoshi? Princess: HE WHAT!!! __________________________ (The Desert) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_ysGxXIYIk Ancient Minister: Why did you follow me Pink one? Kirby: POYO (Your a bad guy like NME or King Dedede) Ancient Minister: Is that your only reason? Kirby: POYO (Do I need another? You do bad things, I do good things) Ancient Minister: then have at me *Fires Lasers at Kirby* Kirby: POYO!!! (FINAL CUTTER) *Throws a Cutter Sword shaped Beam at the Minister) Ancient Minister: AHHHH *Flies away* Kirby: NO FIGHT FAIR!!!! __________________________________ (Outside the Ruins) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0aFe7gvaOeo Red: Alright Lucas, my Poke'mon are in there. Lucas: Why would this robot guy want to take them? Red: I don't know, but I do know he's about to find a new meaning to pain! Lucas: Yeah, Ya know, I bet that's where Ness is to! Red: I'm sure he is to... __________________________________ (Angel Island) Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LJVi_502mlo Ridley: Hurry onboard my ship! Samus: No, there are innocents on this Island, I won't just leave them... Ridley: I just risked my standing as a Pirate to save your life!!! Pat: Seriously he did, the entire crew is ready to mutiny. Ridley: Shut up Vandusan. Samus: And I thank you for it but I'm not leaving this islands inhabitants!! Pikachu: PIKA!!! Ridley: Fine damnit. Masu: I'm with her. Rin: Small dick basterd? Ridley: FINE! Rin Pat let's jet. Pat: Hell yeah. Rin: Good luck...Masu... Pat: Masu: Made an exception to the roller coaster rule have we? Rin: Oh fuck off. Samus: Come on, we only have 10 Hours left! To be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibari Posted September 20, 2008 Share Posted September 20, 2008 Nice work so far, TLS. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HowAreYaBud Posted September 20, 2008 Share Posted September 20, 2008 Cool. When do I show up? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 20, 2008 Author Share Posted September 20, 2008 Cool. When do I show up? Keep asking and I will let Gheb capture you... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HowAreYaBud Posted September 20, 2008 Share Posted September 20, 2008 Keep asking and I will let Gheb capture you... I'll stop asking... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 20, 2008 Author Share Posted September 20, 2008 I'll stop asking... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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