Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 25, 2008 Author Share Posted September 25, 2008 (edited) Oh my, you guys are funny sometimes, you put me in awkward positions <_<. Stop being hostile TLS. Shuuda didn't do anything wrong, he is just stating an opinion, and trying to help you. Good authors accept and appreciate criticism. Shuuda hasn't flamed you, or trolled you, nor has he broken any rule, I advise you just look at the criticism given and learn from it. Maybe your next work will be better than this(Hard to do) If you do. 1. I acknowledged his criticism and then I pointed out the fact that my fic was almost over(Making it hard to change), and that if he wanted to continue the debate about script form he could make another topic! 2. I actually plan to write my next work prose form, so he should stop whineing and let me finish my (Awesome) fanfic!!!!! Edited September 25, 2008 by Toa Lord Sothe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 1.) Okie. ^_^ 2.) Making* 3.) Cool! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 25, 2008 Author Share Posted September 25, 2008 1.) Okie. ^_^2.) Making* 3.) Cool! 1. ^_^ 2. I have no idea what you mean. 3. I know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 In regard to two. When taking a word like "Make" You take the "E" off, and add "ING" making it "Making" And so on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 It's good TLS but personally I feel like I'm playing Subspace Emissary again. And after this mentally retarted kid butchered it for me, I just don't want to go that way again. Also Shuuda, everyone rights script because that's been the precident since day one. There are very few non script writers. I think either Kiryn or me, Most likely Kiryn started not using script Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 Intresting chapter Toa! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 I love how she just avoids the arguement. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 I love how she just avoids the arguement. I'm cool like that. B) XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 I'm cool like that. B)XD Haha, honestly, I don't see how you do that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 25, 2008 Author Share Posted September 25, 2008 Intresting chapter Toa! :D Is that good? I love how she just avoids the arguement. That's why she's Princess. I'm cool like that. B)XD B) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 (edited) Haha, honestly, I don't see how you do that. Haha, it's just I don't see the point in arguing sometimes, end it just gets me upset, So I just avoid it altogether. XD Edited September 25, 2008 by Princess Kilvas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 Haha, it's just I don't see the point in arguing sometimes, end it just gets me upset, So I just avoid it altogether. XD Very smart. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 Thank you! =D Is that good?That's why she's Princess. B) Yes, that's a very good thing~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 25, 2008 Author Share Posted September 25, 2008 Very smart. I wish I was smart like that... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 I wish I was smart like that... Me too..SO JEALOUS! Learn from her. As I did.Lie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 (edited) EDIT: Shit, my computer did it twice. Edited September 25, 2008 by Mathew O'Connell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 25, 2008 Author Share Posted September 25, 2008 This will probably be over by tomorrow if not the next day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 Really? I better get Part One of my new one ready then. It isn't even readable yet.. *Gets to work* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 This will probably be over by tomorrow if not the next day. Really? Well I can't wait to read it! ;) Really? I better get Part One of my new one ready then. It isn't even readable yet.. *Gets to work* I need to work on my story too.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 I need to work on my story too.... Meh, not really, no need to rush, silly, you always seem so busy. Taking a small break sounds good for you. ^_^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 Meh, not really, no need to rush, silly, you always seem so busy. Taking a small break sounds good for you. ^_^ ...You're right. I'll take a break from it then. For now... :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted September 25, 2008 Share Posted September 25, 2008 Yay. I did it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HowAreYaBud Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 This is absolutely posotutley epic. Everyone here should go read my LoZ fan fic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted September 26, 2008 Author Share Posted September 26, 2008 This is absolutely posotutley epic. Spam I fixed that for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 I do not wish to be offensive however; is there a reason why this is written as a script and not in prose? Sorry, but script formats are a very bad way to write a story. You see, scripts are not written to be read by the audience, but for the actors in a play/film/etc, the audience get most out of it by seeing it being performed, just reading the script is boring and lack vital descriptions (Which I see little to none of in this story) which the audience would get by seeing it on stage.Just wondering if there is a reason for this? shut it newbie script pwns Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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