CobyTheGoober Posted December 12, 2015 Author Share Posted December 12, 2015 Touched up the green guy's hair a bit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 12, 2015 Author Share Posted December 12, 2015 Also made some changes to the fooker emblem portraits. 1. Changed the guy on the bottom left's skin palette. 2. Changed the guy on the top left's face. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted December 12, 2015 Share Posted December 12, 2015 Greenie is now dubbed Lord Voldemort-- the guy has no nose. Top left guy's shoulders are super low. I'd probably raise them a few pixels. Generally, it helps to post only one or two mugs for critique as it takes less time to break down than six. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 12, 2015 Author Share Posted December 12, 2015 Raised shoulders for guy on left, and fixed the nose on the greenie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 16, 2015 Author Share Posted December 16, 2015 No replys? Oh well. Made a portrait of Roy in his smash 4 design. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted December 17, 2015 Share Posted December 17, 2015 that's not too bad. i dig the armor and the trim. and sticking to the original hair is a nice touch, the bridge of his nose is like slanted to our right. and his far eye is really small compared to his close eye. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 19, 2015 Author Share Posted December 19, 2015 Touched it up a bit. I fixed up the nose's bridge, changed the size of the far eye, and changed the armor a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 19, 2015 Author Share Posted December 19, 2015 Also made a sort of archer character, this one is basically full custom. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 20, 2015 Author Share Posted December 20, 2015 Footless Vanessa. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 now do pantless Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 I'm pretty sure she already isn't wearing pants. Her arms are pretty thick and stocky and her hands are kinda derp, but hands are a bitch. Her shoulders look too broad compared to her body, her back needs to be pushed back a bit and her arm needs to come in closer. The breastplate looks odd, I think the breasts are too high. I would make her stance a little more close-legged, like in her OA. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 21, 2015 Author Share Posted December 21, 2015 Does this seem better? And just for Smug: (2 lewd 4 serenes) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 21, 2015 Author Share Posted December 21, 2015 portrait Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueLeafeon Posted December 21, 2015 Share Posted December 21, 2015 Does this seem better? And just for Smug: (2 lewd 4 serenes) Her arms look a bit awkward. Are you hiding them so that you don't have to draw her hands? (I'm guilty of doing that with my drawings lol.) The arm on our right is especially weird, as it's not matching up with her armor. @the portrait: Are you customing those eyes, or are you splicing them? Because I would recommend the latter. The eyes on your sprites always end up looking really...off, for lack of another word. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 21, 2015 Author Share Posted December 21, 2015 I hid the hands because of I'm full of garbage >_< And yeah.. I see it a well with the arm. And the eyes are custom, but I can't really see what is off with them. Explain more? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueLeafeon Posted December 21, 2015 Share Posted December 21, 2015 I hid the hands because of I'm full of garbage >_< And yeah.. I see it a well with the arm. And the eyes are custom, but I can't really see what is off with them. Explain more? I don't blame you. Hands are freaking hard to draw...I can only imagine spriting them. portrait the far eye looks like it's not matching the tilt of her head. The lines under the eyes are both too dark and too solid. If you look closely at the original sprites' eyes, and you'll see that the lines beneath them are lighter at the edges. Your lines make the eye look as if it's flat at the bottom. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 21, 2015 Author Share Posted December 21, 2015 (edited) That explains it... So just a bit of odd tilt and lines, all right sounds fixable. Does this seem to fix it? Edited December 21, 2015 by CobyTheKid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 22, 2015 Author Share Posted December 22, 2015 Hi Kent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 The face's proportions are all out of whack, nose is definitely too long, mouth is a lil small, eyes don't look like they're in the right place. The gold part of the shoulder armor has weird bends and dips that don't make sense, straighten it out. His cape should really be under the pauldron. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 22, 2015 Author Share Posted December 22, 2015 (edited) all right, gonna get it fixed soon. Edited December 22, 2015 by CobyTheKid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 22, 2015 Author Share Posted December 22, 2015 this more like it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueLeafeon Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 I really think you should try splicing faces instead of customing them. You need to have a grasp on what looks good and what doesn't. You cannot use Kent's original hair with his head at that angle. That's why he has a massive wad of hair sticking off the front. The eyes are still small, not in the right place, and just not the right shape. Try studying vanilla sprites more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 23, 2015 Author Share Posted December 23, 2015 (edited) I really think you should try splicing faces instead of customing them. You need to have a grasp on what looks good and what doesn't. Alot of this was just experimentation and need for critique, so I'm probably gonna start splicing on faces for later works till I get better. BUT THAT STILL DOESN'T MEAN THAT I'LL NOT POST SPRITES WITH SHITTY CUSTOM FACES IN THE FUTURE, YAHAHAHAHAH Edited December 23, 2015 by CobyTheKid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 23, 2015 Author Share Posted December 23, 2015 Let's give this another shot shall I? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted December 23, 2015 Share Posted December 23, 2015 looks good to me. keep practicing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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