Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 (edited) Prologue 900 Years before the War of Dawn*, Bionicles and Zunumna both lived on one continent, however they were engaged in an eternal war. After 100 years of battle they had finally found a truce, it was in this truce that this story begins. (15 Years Ago, The Toa Base) Corporal Ishnall: The Zunumna forces are retreating, we may have found peace atlast. Toa Lord Tahu: Thank Nui* we may have found a new peace, a lasting one. Toa Lord Brahman: We can't be so idealistic, let's get ready for the next wave. Corporal Ishnall: Screw, he was right our fronts are being attacked. Toa Lord Tahu: Then why aren't we deploying troops? Corporal Ishnall: Their not Zunumna, their diffrent, shadow like. Toa Lord Brahman: It doesn't matter either way our tactics are the same. Toa Lord Tahu: So standard kill the pricks tactics. Toa Lord Brahman: Yes. Toa Lord Tahu: ^_^ ???: It may not be so simple[/british accent] Toa Lord Tahu: Who are you, how did you get passed our Sentry ???: Physical things like walls and guards are of little consequence to one such as me. Toa Lord Tahu: One such as you? ???: My name is Holareth *Impales Tahu and Brahman with Dark Energy* Corporal Ishnall: NOOOOOO!!!!! ___________________________ And so began the rule of the dark lord Holareth, both the Toa and the Zunumna both fell to his power and the world was covered in darkness. Until 15 Years later... ====================== *The events of FE9/10 **The Toa God Edited November 7, 2008 by Toa Lord Shade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 Seems pretty intresting so far, keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 Seems pretty intresting so far, keep it up! Thanks Kilvas I'll post the new chapter in a sec, gotta do homework first lawl. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 Thanks Kilvas I'll post the new chapter in a sec, gotta do homework first lawl. Alright. I can wait. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 NOTE: This is pretty much uncanon to every single back story on serenes save Gatrie. Chapter 1 (Present Day, A small village in Crimea) *A kid in green is sitting in a tree half asleep* ???: Who am I, Where do I come from, Why the hell am I here, I don't have any family, I'm an outcast, a nut job charity case oh screw it...I'm just- ???: Sothe, SOTHE!!! Sothe: Damnit Princess I'm trying to sleep.... Princess: ROCKSLIDE *A huge Rock falls on Sothe* Sothe: OW! Was that necessary? Princess: No just fun. Sothe: Why do you have to be a mage? Princess: Because Magic is cool. Sothe: Anyway, why did you knock me out of my tree? Princess: Lucario wanted me to get you, he said something about a monster. Sothe: Great, why do I have to be the only Swordsman in this village. Princess: You bitch alot... Sothe: <_< Princess: Sorry... ???: SOTHE!!! Sothe: What is it Luke... Lucario: There's a monster outside of town and the elders need oyu to handle it. Sothe: Duty Calls... ________________________ (The Mountains Near the Village) Sothe: So where is the monster? Lucario: He's right there, down on the other side of the mountain. Sothe: What the hell is that thing? Sothe: *Runs Over* Hey dude are you all... Lucario: What the hell is this thing...he seems...Skeletal Sothe: Whatever he is he's bleeding, we have to get him back to town. Lucario: damn I hate blood. To Be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Kilvas Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 (edited) "Because Magic is cool." XD Nice part! Keep it up. Edited November 7, 2008 by Princess Kilvas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 Chapter 2 (Sothe's House) ???: Uhh...where the hell am I? Sothe: Hey dude, good to see you alive, I didn't think Princess would be able to heal you, what with you being a skeleton freak. ???: Your a real smart ass ya know. Sothe: Thanks it's what I strive for in my life, what's your name anyway freak. ???: Ishnall, Toa Lord Ishnall Sothe: You had some sexy weapons with you, where'd an old freak like you get weapons like that? Ishnall: Their Toa Weapons...very powerful Sothe: Heh, no use having a good weapon if you have no skill. Ishnall: *Pulls out his sword and swings at Sothe* Sothe: *Rolls across the floor and pulls out his Killing Edge* Lucario: What the hell is going on in here? Sothe: Crazy old basterd tried to kill me. Ishnall: Your good kid, I'd like to train you. Sothe: You, train me? Ishnall: I'll make you a deal, we battle in single combat, if you win you get my "Sexy Weapons" and if I win, you have to be my aprentice. Sothe: Pssh, throwing away sexy weapons like that, it's distasteful. Ishnall: On with it then. Sothe: This is retarded, your wounded Ishnall: My move then *Cuts at Sothe* Sothe: Well if we must we must *Runs at Ishnall with his sword extended* Ishnall: SHAAA *Block and Parries Sothe into a walll* Sothe: I'm about to black out.... To Be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 Sorry for short chapters, I wrote alot of this in school so, ya know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oguma Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 This is cool. =O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 This is cool. =O Yayz, I'll write moar in science class tomarrow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatrie: Guns Blazing Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 (edited) i like it how its on par w/ my fanfic! nice. *wishes more people would read and comment on his fanfics* Edited November 7, 2008 by Gatrie Is Over 9000 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 Chapter 3 (The Mountains Near Sothe's House~Two Day Later) Sothe: Jesus why did I agree to be this guy's apprentice. Princess: Because you were over-confident and thought you could beat an old man. Sothe: <_< Lucario: Sothe: *Draws sword* Princess: LAWL ???: Alright, only sothe can come past this point. Sothe: Wish me luck guys... ___________________________ Sothe: Hello, I cam alone like you asked... ???: Good... Ishnall: Let's do this. Sothe: I'm ready *Pulls out a Killing Edge* Ishnall: That sword...leave it behind you. Sothe: No, I payed good money and there's still like 16 uses left! Ishnall: ... Sothe: Fine...*Draws an Iron Sword* Ishnall: Better, now let us go *Dashes at Sothe with Blades out* Sothe: OHMIGOD *Rolls out of the way barely avoiding death* Ishnall: Maybe your not so hopeless. Sothe: I'm full of surprises *Locks Sword with Ishnall* Ishnall: Come on boy, show me your moves!!! Sothe: *Knocks away Ishnall's sword and roundhouse kicks him in the face* Ishnall: SHAAAA *Falls over* Sothe: Wow, your not so great now are you. Ishnall: ... Sothe: You...let me win didn't you.... Ishnall: Yeah. Sothe: DAMNIT!!! ???: SOTHE, ISHNALL!!!! Sothe: Princess what is it. Princess: Some bandits are attacking the town, they have Lucario. To be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 I'd write more but I gotta go to school. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 (edited) Bump, I'll update later. Edited November 7, 2008 by Toa Lord Shade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 Chapter 4 (Bandit Hold Outside Town) Sothe: Alright assholes, give me Lucario and noone gets hurt...much. Princess: That was smart... *A handaxe comes flying at Princess* Sothe: Shit! *Kicks Princess out of the way and catchs axe* Princess: OW, you jerk. Sothe: Sorry :( Princess: ???: Your name is Sothe right, the shrimp keeps screaming for you, is he your bitch or something? Sothe: Let Lucario go. ???: Oh don't be so heroic, the bitch is fine. Sothe: Well in that case theres no reason for me to talk to you. Ishnall: Let him go Sothe. Sothe: What, old man? ???: Ah, hoping to catch a birdie and I snared an eagle. Ishnall: What are you doing here O'Connell ???: My father wanted me to find some basterd named Sothe Ishnall: Leave... ???: Sorry, Ishnall you saved my life but this is my mission...I won't retreat. Sothe: Saved your life? ???: Shut up ya cocky asshole, your next. Ishnall: Mathew...do you know what his name is? Sothe: My name? Mathew: Sothe, what the hell else would it be, this is how I found him. Ishnall: His name is Sothe Holareth. Mathew: What...your shitting me right? Sothe: How the hell did you know my name, not even I know my name damnit!!! Mathew: Shut up, Ishnall if your shitting me I'll.... Ishnall: Go ask your father, he'll tell you himself. Mathew: This is the last time Ishnall, next time we meet, there will be blood. Mathew: Sothe, your bitch is in the basement. *Teleports out* Sothe: What the fuck was that! Sothe: Who the hell was he!!! Sothe: And how the shit tacos did you know my name!!!!!!!!!!! Ishnall: Come back to my house, we have much to talk about. *Walks Away* Princess: Wow Sothe, that was epic!!! Sothe: That's not the word I'd use... Princess: You go talk to Ishnall, I'll get Lucario. _____________________________ (Ishnall's House) Ishnall: Welcome Sothe, you must have many questions. Sothe: Uhh...Damn fucking straight. Ishnall: You go first... Sothe: Who the shit was that man? Ishnall: His name was Mathew O'Connell Holareth, he's my former student and your brother. Sothe: Sothe: WHAT THE SHIT Ishnall: ... Sothe: My Brother.... Sothe: Wait... Sothe: How the hell did you know my name? Ishnall: How the hell did you not know your own name. Sothe: My earliest memory is waking up and not knowing where I was...All I could think of was my name, I knew nothing else... Ishnall: I knew your name because I knew your father. Sothe: My father? Ishnall: It's a long story... Sothe: I have time... To be Continued... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 Aha! I like it...! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 Aha! I like it...! Thanks you sexy bitch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 Me kidnap a bitch! Me has two last names! Me has sword! Me almost killeth Princess! Me use Tirado's line! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 Me kidnap a bitch!Me has two last names! Me has sword! Me almost killeth Princess! Me use Tirado's line! Wow, your epic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 DAMN FUCKING STRAIGHT!!! shouldn't you have made a Review topic?! : O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 Done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 (edited) Chapter 5 (Outside Ishnall's House) Princess: What do you thinks going on in there? Lucario: I don't know, maybe they're just playing Mortal Kombat. Princess: ... Lucario: I dunno, it could happen. Princess: Who was that man anyway. Lucario: What man? Princess: The one who almost killed me. Lucario: I dunno but Ishnall seemed to know him... Princess: Maybe he was... *Sothe walks out of the door* Princess: Sothe are you okay? Sothe: Yeah, I'm gunna go home, I have alot to think about... _________________________ (???) Holareth: Why the hell is Ishnall still alive? Matt: Sorry father but his pupil revealed a little something to me.... Holareth: His...Pupil? Matt: The little prick you sent me to kill, his name was Sothe. Holareth: I told you that... Matt: His name was Sothe Holareth. Holareth: ... Matt: Was he my brother. Holareth: ...Yes... Matt: Why the hell didn't you tell me? Holareth: It wasn't important. Matt: It would have been nice to know. Holareth: Would it have effected you assignment? Matt: No. Holareth: Then go, kill him. Matt: Yes sir. To Be Continued... Edited November 8, 2008 by Toa Lord Shade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 (edited) EDIT: I really have to get used to the Review Section. Edited November 8, 2008 by Locke Cole Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted November 8, 2008 Author Share Posted November 8, 2008 Me no wanna kill Sothey... :'(Oh well. I must do what I must! Nice chapter. Especially the Mortal Kombat thing! Expect to see the chapters get longer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oguma Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 Sothe: And how the shit tacos did you know my name!!!!!!!!!!! LAWL. I laughed for a while. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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