Well, I had a little help from eclipse (she correct a few errors of grammar and vocabulary I made) but the story was all by myself.
Speaking of which, (I'm 17 btw) I had a hard time choosing between writing a serious story or a not serious story. I choose the latter (so I pretty much wrote it for fun, yeah, but I tried to not write nonsense) but I guess I wrote it the wrong way anyway.
You don't have to read it again, my kindness will not make the story better if you didn't like it in the first place but I appreaciate the thought.