Dathiason Kx

Okay, I'm sorry, but there are several things wrong with some of the other people's characters. Reinfleche; 12 is too young for a sniper. Maybe an archer. Maybe. Ether; Is a dragoon a class for dragons? Yuli; I'm not sure if Nergal was around during the Scouring. He was alive with Athos five hundred years afterwords, but not during or before the Scouring.

Athos is an archsage, right?

That would have been boring. *Thinks of Brom and....Nephenee.*

Sorry, my internet died for like, half the day, so I got it up as soon as I could. Name- Jay Dequaz Age- 29 Gender- Male Class- Swordmaster Affinity- Fire Items- Steel Sword, Vulnerary 3x Bio- When Jay was just a little lad, his parents were killed by mercenaries, who proceeded to kidnap him, and raise him as their own. One of them, Lash, was his name, took him in like a son, and taught him of swordplay. He eventually grew strong enough that he began to fight the other mercenaries for respect, and gained much. On one mission, however, Lash disappeared, never to be seen again. Jay eventually quit the company, and left, working as a free lance mercenary, when he took a mission to take out an illegal bandit coup in Port Xin. Arriving there, he easily dispatched the mercenaries on the outside, but their leader was a surprise. It was Lash. However, Lash's brain had been warped by dark magics and he was no longer the same Lash that Jay knew. They fought, which led to Lash eventually getting killed. He now travels the world, training students in the way of the sword, but never really connects with any of them. He now serves the Army of Elibe, fighting the Dragons. He is good friends with Hartmut. Character Description-

I was expecting it. How else would Miciah have survived Jarod? She certainly wouldn't have with her levels on my run through.

This is good. Interesting use of the royal peeps.

I don't think that Greil wanted to fight the Black Knight, but he was trying to; 1. Protect Ike. 2. Stop the BK from taking the Medallion.

Yeah, what they said was right. I would repeat it, but I don't know how to make spoilers, hehe.

Ehh...alright Reinfleche. Never too late to join. And I'll create it as soon as I'm done with my homework....which I have to get back to.

You're welcome. Next chapter soon?

They don't talk in the meeting, because they are just Caenghis's guards, not royalty. Only royalty can talk.

Alright, so like this? Name-Jay Age- 29 Gender- Male Class: Swordmaster Inventory- Steel Sword, Vulnerary 3x. Bio- When Jay was just a little lad, his parents were killed by mercenaries, who proceeded to kidnap him, and raise him as their own. One of them, Lash, was his name, took him in like a son, and taught him of swordplay. He eventually grew strong enough that he began to fight the other mercenaries for respect, and gained much. On one mission, however, Lash disappeared, never to be seen again. Jay eventually quit the company, and left, working as a free lance mercenary, when he took a mission to take out an illegal bandit coup in Port Xin. Arriving there, he easily dispatched the mercenaries on the outside, but their leader was a surprise. It was Lash. However, Lash's brain had been warped by dark magics and he was no longer the same Lash that Jay knew. They fought, which led to Lash eventually getting killed. He now travels the world, training students in the way of the sword, but never really connects with any of them. Character Description- (This good enough?)

Sword-Ike Lance- Kent Axe- Boyd Bow-Rath Anima-Erk Wind-Soren Fire-Tormod Thunder-Ilyana Dark-Canas Light-Rhys

I don't know either. It's relatively and easy chapter(for me at least.)

Whoops, sorry. Didn't know there were feedback threads. Anyway, what are the requirements for handing in a character?

Especially since they can't trade it to another member. It would be like gathering lots of precious items, then setting them on fire.

I think they were just a generic tiger, and a generic cat. No need for names. =)

Lalum, she has better supports than Elphin, and doesn't lie about her social status.

I voted Lugh. He was pretty useful for me, being the first mage, and(with Ellen's careful watch) I used him to kill the boss of the chapter he joins. Afterwords, I use him greatly. Lillina comes to late and there is too wide of a gap between to fix. Hugh costs too much to be really good.

It would depend on the enemies for me. If it's going to be a warrior I'm fighting, I'll easily use Karel, because he could one hit kill the guy. If it's a wyvern rider, I'm going to use Harken because of his axe usage.

Oops...to late. *bird feathers come out of my mouth when I burp* Oh, and, pst! Zakelina! I wanna RP! PM me, and we could come up with an Idea.

Why is it in bold? It hurts my eyes reading it.

The middle of the face is off. There's no shading.

Like what Man of the Year said, it's a bad idea to write character profiles for your characters. The audience will learn about the character, the weapon he uses, his personality from the story(that is, if you are a proficient writer.)

Hm....I think it's only one chapter. It stays chapter 17, no matter what part you are on.