Yuli Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 I see a stray bump on the chin. Unless it's suppose to be there. :x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bohemund Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 I see a stray bump on the chin. Unless it's suppose to be there. :x You're right... needs different shading in that spot to seem more fluid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted February 26, 2009 Author Share Posted February 26, 2009 (edited) indeed it does..perhaps i shall fix it...the obvious base was Morva and the facial hair kinda dorked things up... hows this look? Edited February 26, 2009 by Eccentrica Gallumbits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuli Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 Looks better, but the end of the chin seems a bit too squared and sharp. Maybe try making it more smooth? :x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bohemund Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 (edited) Looks better, but the end of the chin seems a bit too squared and sharp. Maybe try making it more smooth? :x When did you become such a critic? D: Just take away the one corner pixel from the chin's outline. Actually, I just saved and pulled up the sprite in Paint. You're missing a few spots that need an outline (certain parts of the hair). Edited February 26, 2009 by Bohemund Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junkhead Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 Hahaha, I love the Legend Of Zelda ones, Nino as Saria...not that is hilsrious. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolf Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 It looks pretty good except you could use some shading. The sprite looks kind of cut off too. Other than that good job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted February 27, 2009 Author Share Posted February 27, 2009 When did you become such a critic? D:Just take away the one corner pixel from the chin's outline. Actually, I just saved and pulled up the sprite in Paint. You're missing a few spots that need an outline (certain parts of the hair). hmmm actually the chin is supposed to be square.. "lantern chin" if you get me... outline really? where exactly? if you could point it out on the image ill be glad to fix it.. Wolf, the reason its cut off at the bottom is because i really felt no need to include it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted February 27, 2009 Author Share Posted February 27, 2009 heres a modified version of it... (thanks Bohemund!) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bohemund Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 (edited) Sure... mention me so I get blamed instead of you! D: I'd also like to say I like the LoD battle sprite. All the sprites in your OP are actually pretty good. Edited February 27, 2009 by Bohemund Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted August 12, 2009 Author Share Posted August 12, 2009 Super bump. Heres a little sprite like deal i made in paint of Nastasia from Super Paper Mario. I know its very abstract. Alot of those characters in the game are pretty abstract in form. She was kinda fun to make and i know some of her porportion is a little wonky due to the fact i made her a little wider. (and her glasses are kinda not as straight as i would have liked) I did like the final product though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted August 15, 2009 Author Share Posted August 15, 2009 Also i did Count Bleck. Come on guys! check it out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 I don't know what to say other than "It's interesting art.". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted September 3, 2009 Author Share Posted September 3, 2009 Here's a Ron Weasley! Im almost positive theres a little something something wrong with it somewhere. Those with good eyes, tell me what it is! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted September 6, 2009 Author Share Posted September 6, 2009 Draco Malfoy Come on guys! critique! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted September 6, 2009 Share Posted September 6, 2009 Use FE8 tones or FE7 outlines and colors, first. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted September 6, 2009 Author Share Posted September 6, 2009 Use FE8 tones or FE7 outlines and colors, first. Hmmm...i did that actually. The outlines are FE8 colors, i believe. Most of the colors on the rest of the sprites are FE7. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted September 6, 2009 Share Posted September 6, 2009 I meant to choose FE6/7 colors or FE8 colors. You usually can't use both. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rodykitty Posted September 6, 2009 Share Posted September 6, 2009 I meant to choose FE6/7 colors or FE8 colors. You usually can't use both. Sure you can. Just make it look decent, which is done here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Cynthia- Posted September 17, 2009 Share Posted September 17, 2009 I like your Draco a lot, although seeing Draco smile is a little strange. Ron does look off, but I'm not a spiriting expert so I'm not sure why. The face seems sort of narrow at the bottom. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted September 18, 2009 Author Share Posted September 18, 2009 I like your Draco a lot, although seeing Draco smile is a little strange. lol! I showed the sprite to a friend and originally he wasnt smiliing. My friend said "That would rule if he had a smirk on his face." So i added a slight smile thats supposed to be a smirk. I found it tricky to make him smirk... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted November 22, 2009 Author Share Posted November 22, 2009 Some Legend of Dragoon ones i did. Heres Dart: Heres his dragoon form battle sprite: Heres Meru in dragoon form. A little tricky due to the pose i chose: Thats without the hammer. Heres with the hammer. I couldnt angle the hammer properly so hence why it looks weird. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted November 24, 2009 Author Share Posted November 24, 2009 More LOD sprites. The entire team (sans Lavitz) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted December 10, 2009 Author Share Posted December 10, 2009 Alright people, i need your good eyes for this one. Tell me whats wrong with it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted December 10, 2009 Share Posted December 10, 2009 I like Abel. Alice isn't bad, either. Do you really like dragon's wings that much? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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