Caliban of Sycorax Posted March 8, 2012 Share Posted March 8, 2012 I think August could stand a bit more cheekbone definition. If they're going to be that sunk in, there needs to be more shading to show that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted March 8, 2012 Share Posted March 8, 2012 *whistles and walks away* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted March 9, 2012 Share Posted March 9, 2012 *whistles and walks away* This just made me fall over laughing. XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrainFreeze Posted March 11, 2012 Share Posted March 11, 2012 Random bandit. I like this one a lot, except his hair should be less... purple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted March 14, 2012 Author Share Posted March 14, 2012 Rachael, a member of the Royal Alnarian Fifth Troop, commanded by Weiss Helden. She's one of of the only three survivors of the entire Troop. Stupid ocean storms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted March 14, 2012 Share Posted March 14, 2012 Her neck looks kinda short, overall it's pretty good, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 (edited) Lolwut Her neck isn't too short. Her eyes are unnerving me, though, as she sort of looks... dead. Not in a good way. Also there's a bit of dithershit. Don't do thaaaaaat. Oh, oh, and her closed eyes frames are completely flat. May want to lighten them up a bit. Eyes are orbs, not circles. Edited March 15, 2012 by seph1212 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 It might just be me but o me it looks like her necks too short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 (edited) Welp, she doesn't. There you have it o 3 o just noticed though, her shoulders are a bit mismatched in width. Might wanna make the far shoulder come out a bit, and the near shoulder in just a bit. and here comes a Yeti to correct my terminology in pixel art Edited March 15, 2012 by seph1212 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BwdYeti Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 Also there's a bit of dithershit. Don't do thaaaaaat.*Also you have broken sections of shading in the lines of the hair. Don't do thaaaaaaaat.You're trying to antialias detail smaller than a pixel by leaving dark pixels out, but the single pixels/small groups of pixels just appear to be noise and it creates aliasing instead dithering is a different thing entirely ~ ' 3'~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 I like dithershit better. >: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted March 15, 2012 Author Share Posted March 15, 2012 Headache... Headache... Headache.. *shoots self with shotgun* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 Looks good. I like how you reused the shoulders XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted March 15, 2012 Author Share Posted March 15, 2012 (edited) My girlfriend saw that sprite and liked it a lot, so I had to put them on her character's sprite, hence what you see now. Cogarre, son of the late Carcino Council Member Pablo. Cogarre, being one of few among the councilmen to have military training, took arms as one of Pablo's men. Watching his father die on the battlefield, Cogarre vowed that he wouldn't sway to darkness ever again. Since then, he's become a stern watchman on the Melkaen Cost. Edited March 15, 2012 by ∑-sigma- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 She only liked it because it looked like me... XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted March 15, 2012 Author Share Posted March 15, 2012 You look like a leather jacket? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 YES! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos Aurion Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 Maybe it's me, but isn't Rachel's jaw a bit too close from her neck? Also, there is a pixel on the top-left side (OPV) of the lips that seems odd. I have the feeling that the pixel is too dark compare to what it should be. I like Pablo's son. He looks like a friendly psycho. Althought, is his eyebrows a different colors than his hair on purpose? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 Rachel seems a bit small at first glance. I'm not entirely sure how those far bangs work...they kinda just jut out. I'm also slightly concerned as to why she has a man chest. You should curve the trim to hint that there is some boobage going on. You are getting better at the wimminz though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted April 1, 2012 Author Share Posted April 1, 2012 (edited) It was a warm, summer evening... Edited April 15, 2012 by ∑-sigma- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kon Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 (edited) Nice, he really looks like the My Unit default~ It kind of looks like the arms are a bit skinny though. Giving it a closer look, it looks like you're putting a man's head on a teenagers body and that makes it look more than a little awkward. Edited April 1, 2012 by Kon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 To wield a sword that big he'd need more muscle. The arms and torso are a little too skinny at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 Well ... at the very least his right arm(on the left) is way too skinny looking compared to the other one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 Didn't Grado use an axe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 yeah I'm pretty sure he used the garm and Gleipnir since you know, they're grado's twins and you know, he was apparently the savior guy who wielded i'm not actually here though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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