eCut Posted August 29, 2012 Share Posted August 29, 2012 (edited) It's lovely, dear! <3 I think the right (opv) eye and eyebrow on her minimug should be moved down a pixel though. PS: Be around more. :( Edited August 29, 2012 by eCut Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted August 29, 2012 Author Share Posted August 29, 2012 Fixed! Thanks, eCut :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted August 29, 2012 Share Posted August 29, 2012 Fixed! Thanks, eCut :D Tehe, there's a line of white above that eye now~ And no problemo. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted August 29, 2012 Author Share Posted August 29, 2012 Tehe, there's a line of white above that eye now~ AUGH! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted August 29, 2012 Share Posted August 29, 2012 oh yay you finished it :D i dun see anything else, but then again how much merit do i have Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted August 29, 2012 Share Posted August 29, 2012 Okay, save for whatever fixes folks suggest, I think it's done! So sick of looking at it This is amazeballs!! Dat hair! Hnngh. Hair tutorials in the gr9 Astelaine way would be so awesome! LAWL! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 (edited) Yeah, I think you've done everything that needs to be done with that sprite. So time to move on. The good of humanity demands it! :p Edited August 30, 2012 by The Illusive Man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 WHY IS SHE SO PRETTY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 WHY IS SHE SO PRETTY Do you really have to ask that? :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted August 30, 2012 Author Share Posted August 30, 2012 (edited) Move on? Trust me, I'm glad to! Anyhoo, fixing this fellow up, seeing as he's going to be featured in a (mystery) hack project soon! -> Still have more to do with the hair, but at least I corrected some things about the face that were bothering me. I widened the face on the left side (opv) and adjusted his left eye. Eyebrow fix on the right, too. Suggestions for hair improvements are quite welcome. Edited August 30, 2012 by Astelaine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 I'd suggest making the hair more hairy and less tentacle-y. It'd help if you used less of the third shade to divide each clump of hair and used quite a bit more of the second shade instead to help with definition and adding a bit more detail. Also pointless but not so much irrelevant information: I love this mug so much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 (edited) I love this sprite a lot. Such good design and your work is so pretty and clean! Another suggestion maybe to make the hair more realistic is to consider what hair looks like when it's behind an ear, in your sprite it kinda curls around the ear (and helps contribute to the aforementioned tentacle-y look.) In this photo, part of hair is behind the ear, and the hair that isn't behind the ear sits on top of the rest of the hair. I understand if his hair just happens to curl that way (in which case I think his ear would be partially obscured), just right now there's some odd tension between his ear and how his hair is placed, they don't seem to be affecting each other like they should. Adding definition/thinner strands of hair will help this too Edited August 30, 2012 by Mewiyev Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 Move on? Trust me, I'm glad to! Anyhoo, fixing this fellow up, seeing as he's going to be featured in a (mystery) hack project soon! -> Still have more to do with the hair, but at least I corrected some things about the face that were bothering me. I widened the face on the left side (opv) and adjusted his left eye. Eyebrow fix on the right, too. Suggestions for hair improvements are quite welcome. The part in the back of the hair made more sense on the previous version, actually. Actually the hair was pretty fine before IMO. One issue I'd have to point out is that it looks like his mandible and ear are aligned with each other. In most men, there's kind of a tilt upward before you reach the ear, even at an angle with an earring it should be defined more.(use more of skin color 4 to the left(opv) of the ear lobe and it should be corrected.) Other than that, it's a very clean and smooth sprite. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted August 31, 2012 Share Posted August 31, 2012 Move on? Trust me, I'm glad to! Anyhoo, fixing this fellow up, seeing as he's going to be featured in a (mystery) hack project soon! -> Still have more to do with the hair, but at least I corrected some things about the face that were bothering me. I widened the face on the left side (opv) and adjusted his left eye. Eyebrow fix on the right, too. Suggestions for hair improvements are quite welcome. Omg he looks kinda like a character who would work in my own sprite project! I dont have much in the way of critique but, i do agree with Nayr that the previous one's hair makes a bit more sense because of the extra shading lines. *shrug* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seph6969 Posted August 31, 2012 Share Posted August 31, 2012 Your sprites are quite good! Although proportions and angles are slightly odd at times, your sprites are very clean and of high quality. I do say, please continue! I'd like to see more from you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted August 31, 2012 Share Posted August 31, 2012 Omg he looks kinda like a character who would work in my own sprite project! Oberyn Martell? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted August 31, 2012 Share Posted August 31, 2012 your stuff are way awesome. Are all your works in this thread? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted September 1, 2012 Share Posted September 1, 2012 Oberyn Martell? I was thinking Daario Neharis but yeah! That would work for Oberyn! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted September 2, 2012 Author Share Posted September 2, 2012 (edited) proportions and angles are slightly odd at times If you're going to say something like this, you have to tell me exactly what strikes you as odd, and where. your stuff are way awesome. Are all your works in this thread? Thank you! Check the first post of the first page of this thread - all my finished works are collected there. Edited September 2, 2012 by Astelaine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted September 3, 2012 Share Posted September 3, 2012 If you're going to say something like this, you have to tell me exactly what strikes you as odd, and where. Welcome to my world, Astel. People say I don't listen to cnc. Truth is, a lot of times I cant get a straight answer out of people. "Wonky" is not an explanation! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted September 3, 2012 Share Posted September 3, 2012 question though, what sprites did you splice for Estelle? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted September 3, 2012 Share Posted September 3, 2012 Splice? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted September 3, 2012 Share Posted September 3, 2012 Splice? edit/mix and match/used Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted September 3, 2012 Share Posted September 3, 2012 it's fully custom'd (I think?) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted September 3, 2012 Share Posted September 3, 2012 I know what a splice is. I don't think the dancer is a splice :x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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