CrushCrushCrush Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 So is Eliwoods! look at the example. And make the neck thicker like Ecut says. Make the darkest hair tone darker as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted February 18, 2011 Author Share Posted February 18, 2011 (edited) Well, here's what I have now. What's wrong with it now? Edit: Also, because I felt like it. Yes, horribly made. Edited February 18, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted March 3, 2011 Author Share Posted March 3, 2011 (edited) Poste de double! New FC, feel free to tear it apart. Update Update Dos. Edited March 4, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted March 19, 2011 Author Share Posted March 19, 2011 (edited) It's been almost 3 weeks, and you people need something to tear apart, so hear you go. Edited March 19, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 13, 2011 Author Share Posted April 13, 2011 (edited) SPRITE THREAD, GET OUT OF THE 2ND PAGE. Back to splicing~ T-TRENT, WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH THAT GUN? I liked the face too much ;~; This was based off of a crush, I'm irrational right now. Sorry ;~; Also, WIP Soldier Revamp. Trying to whip the Magvel loldiers into FE10 shape! Edited April 13, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 (edited) The girl should have some more shading on the hair as well as more hair at the back of her head. Edited April 13, 2011 by Shirona Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 What Kai said. It looks like she's wearing a giant glob of playdough on her bald head. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 13, 2011 Author Share Posted April 13, 2011 Alright, on it. Is the face/neck OK (Bar the chin shading)? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 Face is decent, neck looks like a trapezoid. It should be straight. You're using L'arachel for the body, reference her neck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 13, 2011 Author Share Posted April 13, 2011 More hair was added in the back, the neck is more L'Arachel-y, and the hair isn't as doughy. I think it looked like that because I was aiming for the bang to overlap the hairline, and I guess that was an older version, given it probably wasn't as different. Some problems I can make out of this is that the neck-shoulder area seems flat to me, but I can't tell for sure. The left(opv) eye seems weird to me, but Iunno. I hate how the hair is making the ear look weird ;~; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 (edited) The hair's still a giant piece of playdough, and, the shading/shape is looking goofy right here EDIT: and your ear is too low. Edited April 13, 2011 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
47948201 Posted April 13, 2011 Share Posted April 13, 2011 The hair wants lines indicating shading within it. Right now it looks more like a hat. And that one line that is there implies an odd head shape. The left side hanging down looks like it ought to be behind her face, and the ear showing has that outline line on the bottom that looks pretty bleh. And either L'Arachel's shoulders are too wide or the head is off. And the clavicle obviously wants shading like you said, but whatever. ... Yeah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 21, 2011 Author Share Posted April 21, 2011 lolfiller WIP shield Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 Neck's too long, hair is too dark in contrast to the rest of the sprite, needs more AA on the neck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 21, 2011 Author Share Posted April 21, 2011 Everything but the hair was the reason it was WIP(Also because the upper chest wasn't worked on extensively.). Well, the hair tip was good. Thanks for that ^-^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 21, 2011 Author Share Posted April 21, 2011 So, with all stated problems addressed, the back-to-splicing splice is up. Though the hair going down her back is bothering me, and was hoping to get some suggestions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 Pretty good splice, Joe. As for the hair going down the back, I see no problem with it, really. If you get an idea, do what you will with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 21, 2011 Author Share Posted April 21, 2011 It just seemed a little off to me. But I suppose that doesn't really mean much XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 (edited) Well, really the hair thing is a small issue, but either her hair is tied too low or her hair above/before the part where it's tied is too tight. You could go for two different effects here; one that looks more like Natalie's hair or one that looks more like Juno's hair. Have a look at those two to see what I'm talking about. I'm in a bit of a hurry now so you'll have to excuse me if I sound a bit vague. I'll go more into it when I get a chance. Other than that, though, I don't see any major issues. Edited April 22, 2011 by Maklo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 26, 2011 Author Share Posted April 26, 2011 WIP Draco with an axe. Issues? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
47948201 Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 Um, yeah, he doesn't have an axe. The outline chin pixel on the dragon looks odd, but maybe that's in the original sprite. Oh, wait, there's the axe. It looks nice by itself, but doesn't make sense. It looks like it's being held parallel to the screen, but the rider's arm is so close to his side that it should be going through the dragon if that was the case. And I think one of the wing spikes is transparent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 26, 2011 Author Share Posted April 26, 2011 I addressed the axe problem slightly before you replyed. Sexy palette if I say so myself :tangerine: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
47948201 Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 "Sexy" I don't know about, though I am a little biased toward using that word less leniently than most, but it is a nice palette. Also, there's a random brown pixel on the tail's outline(Kinda also on the dragon's face, but that one's more explainable), the wing spike in front of the guy is still transparent(I think) and maybe--MAYBE he'd look better if his body was turned more so he's facing more to the opponent and less to the screen. But don't hold me to that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted April 29, 2011 Author Share Posted April 29, 2011 Meh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
47948201 Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 Random brown pixel between eyes, nearby hair pixel wants to not stand out so much (maybe you meant to put the brown one a little closer but missed?) double-part/color collar makes no sense, face kinda sorta cuts off for ear, neck sorta seems too thin.. Just compared with some actual FE gals, it is... Aaaand that's pretty much all I can come up with aside from those skin things in her hair. Nice job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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