Lord of Gabriel Knight Posted April 13, 2014 Share Posted April 13, 2014 My god. The blonde lady's hair. It's so perfect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted April 13, 2014 Share Posted April 13, 2014 I drew up a little comparison to show you how small the queen's head is I think you need to widen the face by a couple of pixels and move the area where the hair part is up by a few pixels, and maybe bring in the right side OPV in a tiny bit. Excellent work on the body, though, as always Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted April 13, 2014 Share Posted April 13, 2014 I agree with the crit above on the queen, although I don't mind a smaller head, it's got some weirdness that Agro already gave advice on. One thing that wasn't mentioned was the shape of the jaw, though, like if you take away that strand of hair that's covering the far side of her face, it becomes a little more apparent that the center of her face isn't lining up with all of her features. The center of her nose/eyes don't line up with the chin/mouth, so to me it looks like her whole lower face is skewed to front-view while the rest of her is 3/4 view. I think one way to fix that problem would just be to move the shading of the lower lip a pixel to the left, without moving the actual mouth. Another small (possibly opinion thing) is that the far side of her face seems undershaded. It would be more in shadow, especially because that big chunk of hair is over top of it. She could also stand to have more cheek showing on that far side of her face, it seems almost like it got cut off. Oh and the blonde lady is real cool. Neck seems a bit long though? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos Aurion Posted April 13, 2014 Share Posted April 13, 2014 ou - a - ou! Love what you did with the base I give you. Really nice outfit. But i agree with Agro, the head is quite small. Especially when you compare it with your blond hair mug. On the chibi, I think you should remove the hair on her face, It looks like a purple tear or purple scar more than hair atm. C'est des couleurs de FE8 que tu as utilisé pour ce mug? Parce qu'elle lui vont vraiment bien à mon avis Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted April 15, 2014 Author Share Posted April 15, 2014 i don't really know what I could do since the proportion was the origin of her head's size. So I just try to split it all. It's true that if I had to make it fit the normal size proportion it would be WAY bigger. But well does the 2nd one in each line looks better ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted April 16, 2014 Share Posted April 16, 2014 The 3rd one on the bottom is closer to what I'd call "proportionate" compared to other sprites IMO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted April 20, 2014 Author Share Posted April 20, 2014 A bit different this time. I'm getting lazy at portraits for the moment, and make fun with something else : This is my version of the Halberdier's mapsprite. I wanted it to be more close to the GBAFE promoted Mapsprites, because I obviously used the soldier's base to make it. It's entirely free to use, you can insert it in your hack without asking me permission. This sprites are to be improved so any comment is welcomed =) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Gabriel Knight Posted April 20, 2014 Share Posted April 20, 2014 This looks very nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 Interesting. I don't supposed it corresponds to a particular battle sprite right now. Never really thought about how the only map sprites that really matched their promotion's map sprites were mounted units. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted April 22, 2014 Author Share Posted April 22, 2014 Actually. It fit with those two Imo. [spoiler=Halberdier (Bonestorm)]No Permission neededCredit: Bonestorm/April and JubbyDescription: The soldiers have something to promote to. (Based on Ephraim's animation)Extra: Ask MageKnight404 to use his class card for this. Jubby has a map sprite for this, and you don't need to ask for it.Download Especially the second one since my MapSprite doesn't have a mantle. [spoiler=Halberdier 2.0 (The Blind Archer)] No Permission needed Credit: The Blind Archer Description: New and improved version to his previous animation. Download Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 Right, TBA's 2.0. Forgot there was one other than Yeti's without a cape. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siuloir Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 Flatten the peak on the map sprite's helmet, IMO. It will look less like a direct Armorknight splice then. Well done with the body though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted April 24, 2014 Author Share Posted April 24, 2014 (edited) A new full custom portrait. I putting it before I complete it. Because I know my proportions suck often x) So if you find some disproportions, here's the mug : About the Helmet, I tried to make it more flat. But it was... really not good. BUT since I'm not patient, I finished the V.1 : Edited April 24, 2014 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted April 25, 2014 Share Posted April 25, 2014 I love it. Sometime you can tell an artists custom work by a certain style (the most extreme example would be MK404), but that looks like it could fit right into an FE game as one of the nicer mugs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted May 29, 2014 Author Share Posted May 29, 2014 (edited) Hi guys! Here's an up from the previous portrait. And! A brand new one. (Did I just turned the gem to red? Eh... ) Here's the new portrait : ~Linaeld~ I didn't finished the locked part of his hair. And he needs a chibi portrait Edited May 29, 2014 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted May 29, 2014 Share Posted May 29, 2014 That's gorgeous. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted May 29, 2014 Share Posted May 29, 2014 (edited) Your hack is going to be quite pretty. That animation request,,. it's looking more interesting by the day. Edited May 29, 2014 by deranger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siuloir Posted May 29, 2014 Share Posted May 29, 2014 Linaeld's design is really awesome. I like the detailing on her headwraps and vest. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted May 29, 2014 Share Posted May 29, 2014 Linaeld's design is really awesome. I like the detailing on her headwraps and vest. ...Solum said it's a he. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted May 29, 2014 Author Share Posted May 29, 2014 (edited) ...Solum said it's a he. Yeah. I should've said it's a trap. Because there's always traps like this in this kind of universe Edited May 29, 2014 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted June 13, 2014 Author Share Posted June 13, 2014 I'm too lazy to work on my hack today. So I started this little portrait : Since I'm super bad at spriting transparent things like Canas's glass I just reduced her original body xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Gabriel Knight Posted June 14, 2014 Share Posted June 14, 2014 I think the head and body are excellently sprited. It looks just like her in game art. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haku Posted June 14, 2014 Share Posted June 14, 2014 (edited) Wow Ashunera looks great! I think the translucent robes look fine too. The only thing that seems a bit off is that the neck is slightly too narrow. Edited June 14, 2014 by Haku Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted June 14, 2014 Share Posted June 14, 2014 That's really well done, but the neck is bit too tiny for the size of her body and head, it's like a twig. I'm pretty sure she's not that... gentle looking either. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted June 14, 2014 Author Share Posted June 14, 2014 (edited) I just forgot to put the reference. Here's a more advanced version. I tried to correct the neck. I don't think it can go further. Edited June 14, 2014 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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