Jubby Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 lol his wings randomly have a whole bunnch of extra spikes when he comes down ;/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowofchaos Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 (edited) Jumpy transition there. Might be just one frame, but our eyes are able to pick up a jump ever so slightly. JUBBBBY.... YOUR FREAKING ARCHSAGE PACKAGE. Maybe you should aim for a downward smoother diagonal slash type dive. Like how the swordmaster's regular attack starts out. It's that dragon lord dive frame that's making it look jumpy. Edited July 15, 2012 by shadowofchaos Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BwdYeti Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 I can't breathe Maybe take a page from the original flier animations/the FE8 wolf animations and make it stop when it bites/whatever the target, and then continues flying afterward Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 (edited) Jumpy transition there. Might be just one frame, but our eyes are able to pick up a jump ever so slightly. JUBBBBY.... YOUR FREAKING ARCHSAGE PACKAGE. Maybe you should aim for a downward smoother diagonal slash type dive. Like how the swordmaster's regular attack starts out. It's that dragon lord dive frame that's making it look jumpy. asdfads gruuugh hnngh I gave ML critique on those exact two frames. Notice the date? ml y u no fix b4 random update post if it still looks bad Edited July 15, 2012 by Klokinator Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercenary Lord Posted July 15, 2012 Author Share Posted July 15, 2012 I totally forgot. So there. Yeti, SoC, eJubs, Vamp, tank you all very much for continuing to put up with my antics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 Jumpy transition there. Might be just one frame, but our eyes are able to pick up a jump ever so slightly. JUBBBBY.... YOUR FREAKING ARCHSAGE PACKAGE. Maybe you should aim for a downward smoother diagonal slash type dive. Like how the swordmaster's regular attack starts out. It's that dragon lord dive frame that's making it look jumpy. goddammit rey don't hate i was busy studying for carcurus Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 Well, I can't do what he did, I don't know how Rey ripped the frames. What rey pointed out goes both ways; the dragon rises too abruptly, too. Also, when the dragon dashes forward, there's blurring, then a fully materialized image of the dragon, then more blurring. It looks like the dragon very briefly abruptly stopped in the middle of her dash. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 (edited) Correction: I used the entire Wyvern Lord for the landing frames. :3 But I see what you mean. And I probably should have given the sheet as well. [spoiler=Here.] Have at it. This should make things a lot easier to critique. And now I can actually see what everyone's talking about, yeah. He posted a frame sheet, look at that, I guess.:B Edited July 16, 2012 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 (edited) I WAS RAISED TO BREED, NOT TO READ ...ahem. Cool, now I can show this. Don't do this. The frame in the middle should be a blur too! Edited July 16, 2012 by April Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercenary Lord Posted July 16, 2012 Author Share Posted July 16, 2012 (edited) Ooooooh, you're right. Thank yooouuu. And wait who is Rey. Edited July 16, 2012 by Mercenary Lord Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 shadowofchaos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercenary Lord Posted July 16, 2012 Author Share Posted July 16, 2012 Aha, my short time on the FE scene continues to haunt me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 Offtopic but, I thought Rey was MK404? Or is that Ray? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 Ray is MK404, Rey is SoC. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 (edited) ray = mk404 =/= rey = shadowofchaos = ninian fanboy derp damn ninjas Edited July 17, 2012 by Kitty of Time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 Huh, that means I'll have to edit Seph's bio in the MoH topic. Thanks, and now let's get back on topic about stuffs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercenary Lord Posted July 17, 2012 Author Share Posted July 17, 2012 Nothin to get on topic about until I get around to fixing up the sprite with all the crit I got. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 It looks like the dragon very briefly abruptly stopped in the middle of her dash. I know there isn't any male genetalia visible, but a quirky thought occured to me. Why the heck do you think this is a female dragon XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 I know there isn't any male genetalia visible, but a quirky thought occured to me. Why the heck do you think this is a female dragon XD It's an inside thing; I call every nonhuman creature a female by default. My friends would get it, lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercenary Lord Posted August 14, 2012 Author Share Posted August 14, 2012 Hey look, Pirates and Potatoes. Now, this pirate I really want to get right. Please, annihilate it with brutal critique. And a ninja potato that I did in my spare time because I've always wanted to. May or may not do anything more on it. Strictly speaking, it isn't FE, but I just wanted to throw it up anyway. More stuff! Yeeeeeaaaah~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercenary Lord Posted August 17, 2012 Author Share Posted August 17, 2012 (edited) I made a splice, whee...for the first time in months. I need help, because it is far from perfect. Thank you. I'd like to call him Geralde, and he would most likely be either a cavalier or a paladin. I used a lot of Beyard in it, but I just like that guy. Anyway, have at it.please Edited August 17, 2012 by Mercenary Lord Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 the nose is trange, eyes may use a bit of shading, and... uhm, clean the hair! °w° Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 If the line around his neck is hinting armor, that's gotta be painful tight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercenary Lord Posted August 17, 2012 Author Share Posted August 17, 2012 Haha...ha. Clean the hair. Heh, that was funny. I'll look into it, thank. i don't know how help meeeeee Although I'm pretty sure the eyes are a direct rip from someone, so maybe you could elaborate. That line was supposed to be kinda like a shirt under the armor, but you're right, it doesn't really work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 Nice rehash on the armor, though the hair could use a little less going in totally opposite directions than other hair it's next to. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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