singularity Posted August 21, 2015 Share Posted August 21, 2015 0: Wow I agree, the messy hair is beautiful, but Solum is right. Is this a splice of a scratch? I can't tell XD seems like the face's spliced while rest is custom to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Druid Posted August 21, 2015 Share Posted August 21, 2015 seems like the face's spliced while rest is custom to me. dat hair though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted August 21, 2015 Share Posted August 21, 2015 (edited) That's because it is a spliced face. Lyn + Isadora. Also, that hairstyle is one of the options for female MUs in FEA: Edited August 21, 2015 by Sphalerite Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Druid Posted August 21, 2015 Share Posted August 21, 2015 o: That makes sense. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted August 21, 2015 Author Share Posted August 21, 2015 Fiora and Isadora but close enough. I can't do female faces so I just splice them... they all look pretty similar anyways. Yeah hair is based on that one, it was a request I got. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted September 8, 2015 Author Share Posted September 8, 2015 I made a mug! With a video! That didn't turn out terrible! probably because I actually knew what I was going to draw [spoiler=lol] I always find the shittiness of my original sketches hilarious Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt.Smirks Posted September 8, 2015 Share Posted September 8, 2015 I like the concept and his hair is great but his face has a lot of issues. Most obvious is that is eyes are at a different angle than the rest of his face... or maybe his face is at a different angle than his eyes... I dunno. The way it is now makes it look like either his jaw is super short or his eyes are squished together or both. Something bothers me about his neck too but I can't put my finger on it. Too long maybe? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted September 8, 2015 Share Posted September 8, 2015 I like the concept and his hair is great but his face has a lot of issues. Most obvious is that is eyes are at a different angle than the rest of his face... or maybe his face is at a different angle than his eyes... I dunno. The way it is now makes it look like either his jaw is super short or his eyes are squished together or both. Something bothers me about his neck too but I can't put my finger on it. Too long maybe? whoaa spotted smirks! Wher've you been!? But yeah, I thought the neck seem quite long as well. I think you should bring the left OPV eye down a couple pixels, or slant his eye diagonally down more. If you catch my drift :o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted September 8, 2015 Share Posted September 8, 2015 (edited) I admire the way you keep up your creativity and design Toa. Still having some proportional issues mainly with the faces. You have some great designs, and some really great work on the bodies, but the faces still look a bit off... Will try to give you a better facial reference/tutorial if I can find one or may just try showing you visually if I have the time... :\ Body and colors looking pretty good, but maybe something more could be done with the design? Currently the green shirt and brown collar seem somewhat clashing... And a little plain or unshaded? Toss a shoulder belt or something in there? Needs... Just something more. Think Smirks is right... Neck has issues, appears to be at a different angle from the head? Like... They seem like two pieces slapped together rather than properly attached. :o I like the hair, design and colors though much like Smirks. :D Love your effort, positivity, and attitude though. Keep 'er up Toa! ;) Edited September 8, 2015 by TheErrantShepherd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshi Posted September 8, 2015 Share Posted September 8, 2015 Derped with the face a little bit. Still has some angle issues, but I gotta run. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted September 9, 2015 Author Share Posted September 9, 2015 Glad you guys like the hair, definitely my favorite part. I'm having a lot of fun doing hair these days. Anyways, I think we're getting somewhere. Made a lot of face tweaks, is that better? I adjusted his collarbones and got rid of 1 pixel of neck so hopefully the neck is better now too. Haven't started any body edits yet besides making the green a little more neutral. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted September 27, 2015 Author Share Posted September 27, 2015 Fates mugs continue. Flora this time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 (edited) Flora looks quite good. Sometimes the proportions on your faces are still a bit off... But you are definitely improving bud... And you are doing well in practically every other area. Nice work, Toa. :) Edited September 27, 2015 by TheErrantShepherd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted October 24, 2015 Author Share Posted October 24, 2015 (edited) Almost a whole month :O *dumps sprites* Edited October 24, 2015 by Toa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 So much variety. :) Hard to know where to start on commenting... Will likely come back to this to give you some feedback on all of them. In the meantime, my favorites would be the red haired battle sprite(cool pose and design) and probably the Black armored mug.(though his face still bugs me a bit, but that is a tough angle to get right) Will comment a bit more in depth soon. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted December 4, 2015 Author Share Posted December 4, 2015 This is me I am a smash bro now My name isn't very good for this is it? this youtube channel has videos of me spriting on it, go check it out! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCkPaZbiQRzumUHPI7fZAnEQ/featured Sometimes I live stream, you should check that out too! http://www.twitch.tv/serenesspritingstreams/v/28140315 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted December 4, 2015 Share Posted December 4, 2015 Almost a whole month :O *dumps sprites* im finding your latest fc's very impressive and a lot better than when started out. awesome improvements bro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted December 4, 2015 Share Posted December 4, 2015 Toa = most improved mugs? ;) Ghastly is right. You have been doing awesome bud. Nice work. I'm really feeling it. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R.O.Berc Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 This is me I am a smash bro now My name isn't very good for this is it? this youtube channel has videos of me spriting on it, go check it out! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCkPaZbiQRzumUHPI7fZAnEQ/featured Sometimes I live stream, you should check that out too! http://www.twitch.tv/serenesspritingstreams/v/28140315 Haha I love this. The stern face and when I look above your sf avatar: "I'm really feeling it!" :| Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 (edited) "I wanted to be Ryu for the costume party...but Mom made me Shulk instead. I'm only kinda feeling it..." >:| Edited December 5, 2015 by Princess Peachar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted December 5, 2015 Author Share Posted December 5, 2015 "But moooom, I've never even played Xenoblade!" "Shut up, this is what you're doing!" ...I'm really feeling it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted December 20, 2015 Author Share Posted December 20, 2015 (edited) Fates mugs. Leon's hair is still a bit of a WIP. I've updated Camilla's body since the original I made in April. Debating whether or not to do Elise, probably won't. Here's the other two for the full set: Twitch vod of me working on Gunther and Leon. http://www.twitch.tv/serenesspritingstreams/v/30947840 Edited December 20, 2015 by Monatoa Boy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted December 20, 2015 Share Posted December 20, 2015 Fates mugs. Leon's hair is still a bit of a WIP. Updated Camilla's body. Debating whether or not to do Elise, probably won't. Here's the other two for the full set: Twitch vod of me working on Gunther and Leon. http://www.twitch.tv/serenesspritingstreams/v/30947840 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA YOU CHANGED CAMILLA CUDDLES! Now i gotta put the updated one in the sig. The Shulk sprite you did is neato, but theres something about his hair thats rubbing me the wrong way... I feel like it should be less piecey looking and a bit more...floofy? /shrug Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 Dat Shulk Mug has such a long pouty face... But other than that, i'd still really feel it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted December 27, 2015 Author Share Posted December 27, 2015 1/2 christmas cav? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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