Epic way to end the chapter! What a cliffhanger!
Also, you did a good job writing Lyle&Masu's relationship.
Masu: ...I'm sorry too.
Lyle: You should be.
Masu: Ass.
Lyle: *He smirks.*
XD
This is one of my favorates.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tQ_lXJTaT5g
Lyle showed me this one, it's an instant favorate.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ktFDot-gPZQ
Also, this was funny.
I made Knoll a summoner just because summoners were only avalible in FE8. On one of the last chapters with the lava caves, I spent 100s of turns summoning getting Knoll to lvl 20. ^_^