CT075 Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 (edited) *obliterates everything* So I gave up on spriting for a while. Then Josh taught me how to do weapon icons and I figured it's time to re-open shop. Any comments, criticisms or blatent trolling would be good, because at least that tells me how my work is thought of. Note: Almost all of it is up for grabs. Just PM me first, because some of it for a super-secret project. Edited March 15, 2011 by Camtech075 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 The last one reminds me of Johan from Monster a little, I think it's the eyes. Also what's up with the back of his hair? It's got a weird curly hilight-thing going on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted September 26, 2010 Author Share Posted September 26, 2010 (edited) *nothing to see here* Edited March 7, 2011 by Kamui Gakupo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soviet Gregor Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 (The first one) Looks like Egreff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 Most of this stuff is either for the splicing competition or for my hack, "Stella, Solis, Luna". And I don't have much stuff for the latter. Yet. Pretty much the only mug for my hack that I have done completely by myself. It also stinks beyond belief. I'm probably going to redo it sooner or later. Round 12 splicing competition, pretty much the first competition I entered. Gogo Round 1 splice. This is of course much later than the actual round. Round 13, the most recent one. It probably could use some work, but I'm happy with it for now. Any comments, criticisms or blatent trolling would be good, because at least that tells me how my work is thought of. Well, for starters Number 1 needs shading, like lots of it Number two needs hair shading. What the hell is that behind his neck? 3 looks pretty from afar but like all of them, needs shading. The chin is ugly too Holy fuck this one actually has hair shading I think you need to work on the armor some more, it looks messy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted September 26, 2010 Author Share Posted September 26, 2010 (edited) Blah Edited March 7, 2011 by Kamui Gakupo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted October 1, 2010 Author Share Posted October 1, 2010 (edited) *obliterates* Edited March 7, 2011 by Kamui Gakupo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted October 8, 2010 Author Share Posted October 8, 2010 (edited) *delete* Edited March 7, 2011 by Kamui Gakupo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted October 17, 2010 Author Share Posted October 17, 2010 (edited) *deleted* Edited March 7, 2011 by Kamui Gakupo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 Are you spriting Haar? Uhm.. Cam Cam, It's better for you to splice than custom, your level is still low. Sowwy. >: And his body is too small, straight line is a big no no for sprites. List of things needs to be reshaded: - Hair: It's usually has 3 shades, sometimes 4. But in this case, there's only 2. Need moar. - Neck: It's awkwardly shaded. You should other sprite for shading ref. - Forehead: Uhm, also need to be reshaded. Too much 3rd skin shade, needs more 2rd shade. Overall, YOU NEED TO SPLICE BEFORE CUSTOM. AND WHEN YOU CUSTOM, GET A SPRITE BASE. That, is all. :> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaybee Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 Haar's head is sticking out of his body very awkwardly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 HE'S SO SMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALL I'm with Amelia. Splice before you custom. Hell, I've been splicing for two years, and have only started doing full custom stuff. Give it some time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted October 17, 2010 Author Share Posted October 17, 2010 Yeah... You're probably right. *deletes and starts over* I cut most of the shoulder spikes off of Haar's official art... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 Overall, YOU NEED TO SPLICE BEFORE CUSTOM. AND WHEN YOU CUSTOM, GET A SPRITE BASE. Omg thats trufax. I still have trouble customing. His shoulders look nonexistant and his armor too angular. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 It also helps with customing, or even splicing, to learn basic anatomy and human proportions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted October 17, 2010 Author Share Posted October 17, 2010 I'm not really sure what came over me to make me think I could do it. It was probably late at night or SOMETHING because I'd usually think 5 times before attempting a stunt like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 Even so, anatomy helps with practically ANYTHING you do artistically that involves the human body. It's a very good thing to learn. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 *agrees definalty with lumi* Splice mugs that look similar to Haars armour and for the flicky parts maybe use things from other mugs that look like them? eg) Brenya, Zephiel and Murdoch have tiered like armour shoulder thingys. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 (edited) I made this earlier: It's a splice of Ziess, Karel, Zealot, and i forget the rest, but what I'm trying to say is... What everyone else basically said :) *shot* Edited October 17, 2010 by Dancer A Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted October 17, 2010 Share Posted October 17, 2010 Karel makes every sprite good <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 Facepalm @ Reaper lol!! @Cam The collar is too tall, the eyepatch lacks shadin, and I see straight lines. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted October 18, 2010 Author Share Posted October 18, 2010 (edited) *delete* Edited March 7, 2011 by Kamui Gakupo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 I helped with nothing! No, seriously, I just helped with pointing out skin tones The hair under his ear looks weird with lack of shading on the skin above it. To me, at least. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted October 18, 2010 Share Posted October 18, 2010 (edited) Um its abit messy. like round his face, heres the main areas Edited October 18, 2010 by TheReaper Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted October 18, 2010 Author Share Posted October 18, 2010 (edited) *delete* Edited March 7, 2011 by Kamui Gakupo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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