Thor Odinson Posted November 29, 2010 Author Share Posted November 29, 2010 Coulda told me earlier. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 Well, he just told me now, so I couldn't have told you earlier XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted November 29, 2010 Author Share Posted November 29, 2010 Thanks Astra. Oh hey I see Vamp~ VAMP SAY SOMETHING Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 (edited) Or make it simpler, I know you want him a biiit on the buff side, but at least make it smooth enough first. Red lines are over shading, simplify them like Merc's Karel. Then look at, saaay Vamp's Fargus for help with the muscle bulge. Tealish color should have less 3 skin tons, and a bit less 2nd, but the majority should come from the 2nd. Purple area has......fairly bad shading,as it really shows the jagged lines, which you really don't want. Use more of the darker tones. Pink area could just use more shading, since it's fairly stark right next to the jet black hair. So yeah, there's my fairly crappy attempt at trying to critique. Vamp can correct anything that I say since I know nothing about muscle mass, lol Edited November 29, 2010 by AstraLunaSol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 [3:13:50 PM] AstraLunaSol (Mango): Oh God [3:13:51 PM] AstraLunaSol (Mango): this half body [3:13:57 PM] AstraLunaSol (Mango): is a mess. ._. DON'T KILL ME, DAN, LUMI! IT WAS TRENT'S IDEA! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 [3:13:50 PM] AstraLunaSol (Mango): Oh God [3:13:51 PM] AstraLunaSol (Mango): this half body [3:13:57 PM] AstraLunaSol (Mango): is a mess. ._. DON'T KILL ME, DAN, LUMI! IT WAS TRENT'S IDEA! [6:23:12 PM] Cameron Wrong: I'm tempted to post what he said here in her sprite topic It was so not my idea :< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 (edited) Congratulations, that Shannan has ruined all of my bodily self-esteem. *runs out of the room, sobbing* Edited November 29, 2010 by Furetchen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted November 29, 2010 Author Share Posted November 29, 2010 (edited) Ah dammit. Vamp left. ;~; Anyway Astra, I'll go fix those. Pray that I don't make it messier than it already is. >___< Or maybe I should keep to painting naked men Y/N? Haha :P @Furet: LOL If you think Shanan's ruining your self esteem, wait until you see my Seth in the plans. Edited November 29, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 You want the general shape to be more like this, as for theupper arm/shoulder(trapz/bicep/delt/tricep) shading i think it's a bit too dark and extended too far, you'd be best using 2nd tone to define alot of it :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted November 30, 2010 Author Share Posted November 30, 2010 YESS VAMP THANK YOU. Alright. Next edit. I combine what you said with Astra's. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 Red lines are over shading, simplify them like Merc's Karel. I disagree with this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 I think the near red box area was over-shaded, but I also think Merc's Karel is a little under-shaded, great, but more shading would be an improvement. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peener weener Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 Full version of Shanan. Complete with all the AA fixed, Chibi, and frames. Dat chibi. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 Well, there's the angular issue that Shanan's body is turned over more. But yeah. I'll see what it looks like moved over. There we go. Y/N? I want him in my bed. :E Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted November 30, 2010 Author Share Posted November 30, 2010 Dat chibi. Took me forever. I want him in my bed. :E Me too. :E Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 I want him in my bed. :E Me too. :E I do too :| and I like girls D: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 Rather my room. We could sword-fight! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted November 30, 2010 Author Share Posted November 30, 2010 But he's my sparring partner~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riariadne Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 That chibi is so badass. Awwwww maaaan. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted December 1, 2010 Share Posted December 1, 2010 But he's my sparring partner~ But I thought you two sparred in a different way*shot* XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 1, 2010 Share Posted December 1, 2010 But I thought you two sparred in a different way*shot* XD I dont think she would object to that *also shot* XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted December 1, 2010 Share Posted December 1, 2010 you seem more active on here, and just realised you'd probably see it here first instead of fend abs ref if you want it :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 1, 2010 Author Share Posted December 1, 2010 I love you Vamp. <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted December 1, 2010 Share Posted December 1, 2010 But I thought you two sparred in a different way*shot* XD She has nothing to spar with, I do. ;3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 1, 2010 Author Share Posted December 1, 2010 (edited) I do have training in hand to hand combat~ Edited December 1, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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