Nightmare Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 (edited) Alexander was sitting grimly at his computer desk. "My love needs fulfilment!" He shouted out to himself. Throughout the days, his days were numbered. Before the Date of Blood, he needed to fulfil his love or else he would be robbed of all love for eternity. His one love was an Asian lady, of whom not much was known. It was of such intensity, her unknown factor, that you might as well have pretended she was invisible. But not to Alexander. Alexander's love was profound and beat in his heart with vigour force. The fiery, yet gentle love in his eyes could not be compared to any other look. It was True Love, and Alexander knew of this, which is why he grew more and more eager with each passing day. He also grew anxious. What if he could not achieve his love interest's heart by the time the Date of Blood took place? The thought frightened him, which is why he ignored it and instead looked at himself in the mirror. "I am beautiful," he thought to himself. He then went on his usual routine of programming things, using the knowledge that he attained, with his newly earned degree being proof of it. A week passed... Alexander was still not successful in achieving his love interest's heart. He tried many a method, but they all failed. Then he remembered...he remembered a monster that he knows. The secret of love lied with him! With this realisation, Alexander's face beamed with joy and he made the preparations for the Date of Blood, which took place three days after. In the Date of Blood, Alexander went on stage, his glorious, curly locks of blonde hair streaming fabulously in the coloured lights, wearing a brilliant admiral coat, adorned with medals of his various achievements (the Love Medal was yet to be achieved, but he had already designated a spot for it). He went on stage and took the microphone in hand. "This one's for you...love," he said. His love interest looked at him with a disgruntled expression on her face, as she was used to his gimmicks and not expecting this last one to be any different from the others. But then, the music played and Alexander started to sing... "♪Oh I cannot explain Every time it's the same More I feel that it's real Take my heart I've been lonely too long Oh I can't be so strong Take the chance for romance Take my heart I need you so There's no time I'll ever go Cheri Cheri Lady Going through emotion Love is where you'll find it Listen to your heart Cheri Cheri Lady Living in devotion It's always like the first time Let me take a part Cheri Cheri Lady Like there's no tomorrow Take my heart, don't lose it Listen to your heart Cheri Cheri Lady To know you is to love you If you call me baby I'll be always yours I get up, I get down All my world turns around Who is right, who is wrong? I don't know I've got pain in my heart Got love in my soul Easy come but I think, easy go I need you so Although times, I move so slow Cheri Cheri Lady Going through emotion Love is where you'll find it Listen to your heart Cheri Cheri Lady Living in devotion It's always like the first time Let me take a part Cheri Cheri Lady Like there's no tomorrow Take my heart, don't lose it Listen to your heart Cheri Cheri Lady To know you is to love you If you call me baby I'll be always yours Cheri Cheri Lady Like there's no tomorrow Take my heart, don't lose it Listen to your heart Cheri Cheri Lady To know you is to love you If you call me baby I'll be yours Cheri Cheri Lady Like there's no tomorrow Take my heart, don't lose it Listen to your heart Cheri Cheri Lady To know you is to love you If you call me baby I'll be yours♪" Alexander's beautiful singing voice and perfect song choice, along with his phenomenal dance moves, moved the lady's heart to tears. "That was beautiful!" She exclaimed in joy. "Then, my love, let us ride...into the sunset," Alexander replied. And they lived happily ever after. Edited January 3, 2011 by Nightmare Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mousefire Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 You forgot to add a ton of detail to pretend like you have actual talent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 I see a disturbing lack of two rune-covered swords. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 You mentioned his hair well enough, but I'm thinking he needs shining blue eyes- nay, ORBS. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleph Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 MONSTER TO THE DEPTHS OF HELL WITH YOU. eclipsexObviam is serious business and you need to have more respect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midnight Nightmare Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Beautiful, Nighty! n__n Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucent Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Cliched to hell. Learn to write. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Erk Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 I loved it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Good job Nightmare! :'3 I can obviously see where it's based off of... You should write more...! 8D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Heeheeheehee it made me waugh =3 *thumbs up* And idk what it's a fanfic of. =P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleph Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 I just said what it was a fanfic of Datia dear Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 I just said what it was a fanfic of Datia dear Well okay I said I didn't know what it was about cause I didn't know it. So I didn't recognize you when you said it. =P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NinjaMonkey Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 If you ask me, the words "fan" and "fiction" are the two worst words that you could ever put together... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleph Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Nightmar does this mean you acknowledge eclipsexObviam (OTP)? You DID call it a "fanfic" after all~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anouleth Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 The woman is an obvious Mary Sue, you should be ashamed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 If you ask me, the words "fan" and "fiction" are the two worst words that you could ever put together... Is this a challenge? Or will you apologize for such a horribly misinformed post? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleph Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 You tell him! <3~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted January 4, 2011 Author Share Posted January 4, 2011 You forgot to add a ton of detail to pretend like you have actual talent. I see a disturbing lack of two rune-covered swords. You mentioned his hair well enough, but I'm thinking he needs shining blue eyes- nay, ORBS. The woman is an obvious Mary Sue, you should be ashamed. Oh shoot, there goes my fanfic. MONSTER TO THE DEPTHS OF HELL WITH YOU. eclipsexObviam is serious business and you need to have more respect. But this IS serious! Beautiful, Nighty! n__n I loved it... Good job Nightmare! :'3 I can obviously see where it's based off of... You should write more...! 8D Heeheeheehee it made me waugh =3 *thumbs up* And idk what it's a fanfic of. =P Thank you, thank you. If you ask me, the words "fan" and "fiction" are the two worst words that you could ever put together... lol Nightmar does this mean you acknowledge eclipsexObviam (OTP)? You DID call it a "fanfic" after all~ I WONDER! Cliched to hell. Learn to write. I approved this so you can all see it because it's hilarious. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaybee Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Clap clap clap. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 You also forgot to make your character not too tall, but girthy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted January 4, 2011 Author Share Posted January 4, 2011 I'm sure everyone knows that Alexander's girth is mighty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleph Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Where it counts, anyway Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted January 4, 2011 Share Posted January 4, 2011 Supposedly, that's his frame. All of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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