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CobyTheGoober

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  1. The top robe part looks as if it was at a different angle. The face is super long. The shoulder armor also doesn't look too connected to the arm. The eyes, and hair is pretty good though.
  2. Have him marry Nyx/ Odin, or have him get to an A support with someone as dark mage as base class, ie Nyx or Odin, then use a partner seal/friendship seal.
  3. I think this should be moved to concepts instead, as it seems to still be in the planning stages.
  4. The top of his hair seems super flat, his face is super skinny, neck just a bit too long. The proportions need a lot of work, bu the actual detail/ shading on the portrait so far is actually very nice looking.
  5. ...... can I join the salvaged team...? Im some what competant at sprites,
  6. The thing that you might think as strange is probably how he draws his noses. They are a bit more defined, rounded, and the bridges of the nose are a bit more straighter. It's a stylized thing I think, and honestly I don't think there is any problem to it. Anyways, this is going kinda off topic from Midnight sun.
  7. That's why I'm re doing them for him. EDIT: You should also try and stop sort of trashing others art on your thread. I think it would be better if you saved stuff like this for personal conversations or something, rather than your sprite thread.
  8. The nose is better, and the hair palette is different. Everything else is pretty similar.
  9. By second shade, I mean the second skin shade behind the nose, it's just a splat of it there, making it seem flat. And banding is when a group of pixels hug each other
  10. fuuuck, this is real neat. This Owain is cool af.
  11. here is my submission I'm working on the actual mug, I'll just edit this put and put it in when I'm done.
  12. The trim on the armor should have more AA, and the lines that block out the hair aren't very clean. Not sure if it's just me, but are you still taking colors from the original portrait? Because they look off. The nose is also looking off. You're using too much second shade. Other than though, it's far better than your first full custom. Keep at it. There is also a lot of banding going on in the hair as well.
  13. Change the darker shades of yellow to be more darker, and to stand out. And hey, that's pretty good.
  14. With the trim, I think it's the actual color that you should try and improve, as they sort of blend in too much. The face looks a lot better!
  15. I wish I could just say tl; dr , but it seems really important that I go through it all. Welp, I know what my free time is being spent on.
  16. oof, you've been having some problems with colors, and while they have been getting better, your colors can still use some work.
  17. Dat Hisoka though. looking mighty fine.
  18. I call claim on this next edit. EDIT: Forgot I claimed this. Imma unclaim it lol
  19. programming it should actually be rather easy. The harder part about making those classes is finding an animation for it :p
  20. *Looks at the recent posts on chapter 14 of Team Sanctuary.* Oh my, that's a lot to read.
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