deleted35362 Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 DAMMIT SOLUM Where are your mugs?? I wanna see MOAR Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted June 28, 2012 Author Share Posted June 28, 2012 (edited) Hum I do a double post. To edit a post doesn't inform users of modifications. I would like to delete-post new but I don't know where is the deleting button ! xD Edited July 19, 2012 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted July 19, 2012 Author Share Posted July 19, 2012 (edited) HEY! It's me again! I followed the cleaning up of the blue-haired girl. So there she come back ! I need help to do the mini portrait. I never knew how to make it good. Lord glenn & Freohr Datia > When you said "darkest shade", did you mean the FE8 border colour? I also did a new one, who is a FE10 style soldier. But if someone could help me to shade the helmet, it would be nice ! because I don't know how to shade this ^^ The following sprite is a update of the red armoured girl I posted once a day here : And another one which is my avatar still up. Edited July 19, 2012 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Glenn Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 Lord glenn & Freohr Datia > When you said "darkest shade", did you mean the FE8 border colour? No, I was referring to the color whose RGB value is (29, 87, 116); the darkest hair color that's very prevalent at the top of the sprite. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted July 31, 2012 Author Share Posted July 31, 2012 Hi ladies and gentlemen! I post this new mug which is a revamp of a friend's mug. So this one change himself into This one! I had to make it look like a FE4 mage fighter and with the restriction of keeping him in the same old style. And I'm now trying to improve him ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 Dat hair. Wow dude. srsly someone should teach me to hair better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Blind Archer Posted July 31, 2012 Share Posted July 31, 2012 While I do like the detail on this guy's ponytail, the shading and angle make it seem more like he should be facing sideways rather than at 3/4ths. The hair band should barely be visible, and the bulk of the ponytail should be hidden behind his neck. or you could put one peeking out on the other side of his neck and give him pigtails Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted July 31, 2012 Author Share Posted July 31, 2012 (edited) Blind Archer > I tryed to do what you meant. But I don't master English as I would so it's always difficult for to understant precisly detailed comments. ( I thank you so much for your help of course =) Is it better now? Edited August 1, 2012 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatGuyDownTheStreet Posted August 1, 2012 Share Posted August 1, 2012 The sprite looks really good. The only thing I have to say is that the neck is really long, so I'd shorten it if I were you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Celice Posted August 1, 2012 Share Posted August 1, 2012 The collar seems to blend into the skin too :E It doesn't really stand out dimensionally. Give it some perspective, maybe? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Blind Archer Posted August 1, 2012 Share Posted August 1, 2012 It's getting there. I don't know if I can put it into words any better than I already have, so have a picture. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted August 1, 2012 Author Share Posted August 1, 2012 I've reduced his neck by one pixel. I don't know if he needs more. You see it better than me I think =) Blind Archer > Oooookay! But I've hope that I could do his ponytail as he sould keep it on his shoulder in the foreground. I'm affraid of losing the effect it does if I pass it behind. I can try to draw it in another way but... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted August 1, 2012 Share Posted August 1, 2012 http://gyazo.com/b99a776e6afb17dc17cdec985614f6bc well you can probably put it in front like this or something, then, where it falls down more and is around the neck where long, straight hair usually falls if they're in front. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Blind Archer Posted August 1, 2012 Share Posted August 1, 2012 (edited) What I offered was just the simple solution. You're free to experiment with alternatives, of course. Edit: Like the one in the above post. Edited August 1, 2012 by The Blind Archer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatGuyDownTheStreet Posted August 1, 2012 Share Posted August 1, 2012 Yeah, it's still a bit too long. It's because his neck goes into shirt a bit, and so that causes a few problems with the neck length. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos Aurion Posted August 2, 2012 Share Posted August 2, 2012 Goshh! That new Jimmy Poulet is awesome! Phenix's new mug for your hack? I approve what Lumi suggest for the hair. The left side (OPV) of the collar is 1-2 pixels too low IMO. Les cheveux sur la tête me semblent avoir une forme un peu trop ronde, peut-etre regarder avec Pent pour une référence. Mais c'est aussi peut-etre qu'une impression. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted August 6, 2012 Author Share Posted August 6, 2012 XD Ouais ! Jimmy Poulet ! la tête c'est juste que les cheveux flottent un peu. I'm still working hard on it. But I really thank you to help me. I just saw that the hacking area for mugs can't contain it because of this pony tail. So I keep modify it even if i'm not done at all ^^. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted August 7, 2012 Author Share Posted August 7, 2012 (edited) I did the new ponytail. But I Completly don't like him now. =/ And I find he as a big head (much bigger if I reduce his neck n_u ) Edited August 7, 2012 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted August 7, 2012 Share Posted August 7, 2012 (edited) Maybe increase his shoulders? By FE standards the head size is fine. Edited August 7, 2012 by Zhuge Liang Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted August 7, 2012 Share Posted August 7, 2012 Technically that's an improvement, but...artistically, I just liked the ponytail better before. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted August 7, 2012 Share Posted August 7, 2012 I really like it with the new pony tail. But I also thought the large size and how spread out the other one was made the sprite look unbalanced as a composition. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted August 7, 2012 Share Posted August 7, 2012 This would probably be a good time to throw in the quip that his neck is a beanpole and his shoulders look like they're hanging off a scarecrow frame. Would also like to complain about how not-soft-and-fluffy-and-snuggable that scarf is, as well as the fact I have no idea what's going on with his ridiculously pointy collar that makes no physical sense. Also, what am hair shading. There's too much border color going on under the far bang, he has lumps all over his head, and some of the flow fails to make sense. His face is also incredibly flat, with a nondescript profile and buggy eyes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted August 8, 2012 Author Share Posted August 8, 2012 (edited) I definetly don't like him any more xD Here I've modified shading in some parts. Redo a new collar that I try to make it fall at our right. I shade his neck,face and change the hair which fall over it. I'm working on the shoulders. > Jealousy : What do you mean by buggy eyes? Oh... I hope you don't speak about him xD Edited August 8, 2012 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos Aurion Posted August 9, 2012 Share Posted August 9, 2012 The ponytail is thin, try to make it wider. Not a lot, but adding some pixels may help giving back that first ponytail he had. Also, I think it lacks a bit of shade on the skin next to hair, especially next to the forehead. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted August 9, 2012 Share Posted August 9, 2012 Lol idk why you don't like him anymore but whatever. Is it because making edits is annoying? XD Maybe a little more spread out could work, but any thicker? Not sure I agree to that much, especially with hair that straight... I suppose a tiny bit could still work out, but the thickness looks just fine to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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