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Toa

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  1. Toa

    Toa's Sprites

    Masked guy, who's hair gets in the way of his eye holes. Talk about limited visibility. Winged Hussar for BBSSV Conquest version of Lyn WIP. Weird having and trying to use more colors.
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    Toa's Sprites

    It's taken straight from Knoll, but I agree that his face is pretty pointy. IDK, I think it adds to the character in the mug.
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    Boops on a Canvas

    I think he meant that while the spear is in his right hand, and thus on the right (far) side of his body, we can see the motion of the spin on the left(near) side of his body, meaning that either the spear is going through him, he's doing a 360 no scope, or the frame makes no sense.
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    Toa's Sprites

    Decided to try out the ol' splicing. Free to use (like most of my splices)
  5. I think the legs are what's really Eirika-esque. I might move the near leg back a pixel. The near boot doesn't look quite right, too much shine in the middle
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    Boops on a Canvas

    I'll comment on the mug, since I mostly do those. The splice actually looks pretty quality, I like it. After that though, the quality goes down, and art theft is bad D: Her face gets lopsided, her eyes are huge, and it looks like you're trying to add way too much detail into the nose which just ends up looking messy. I made some edits to your latest version to point you in a more correct direction, but since I don't know who this character is I couldn't do a whole lot. Overall, I would recommend you stick with splicing for a while longer. I really like your splice, but your customing is a bit shaky, the proportions aren't quite right and the shading is messy. I would recommend splicing more until you really get a feel for the size and style of mugs. I think my edits might have a bit too much forehead, but I didn't want to spend too much time since it's late. Blargh
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    Fate of Fire

    I finally got palettes working. Also [spoiler=Map]
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    Toa's Sprites

    I'll get back to that later >.> New mug, capes are still kicking my ass, but I like how his hair turned out.
  9. I really enjoyed the interviews, it's cool to see some creator insight into their own projects and the community.
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    Toa's Sprites

    Hooooooooly shit his eyes were far apart o.o Didn't really notice because of the hair in the middle there's one thing fixed. Don't really know what you mean about him being naked, is his armor just not bulky enough?
  11. Abel looks really cross-eyed, and he's jutting his neck out a bit. I like the jeigan warrior's head, he looks like a jolly dwarf or something, and I actually like the helmet. The spikes need a lot of work, they're sharp, get those curves out of there! Also, despite taking up the whole hackbox he looks a bit dinky build wise. I think it's because his head is gigantic. I think your line work needs a bit of work, a lot of these people look kinda lumpy in places :/
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    Toa's Sprites

    Dark knight joins team Nohr. I can't get a good read on this guy, on the box art he looks creepy/insane(I think he has blond eyes there, we don't even do that with 16 colors), but in the trailer he looks pretty normal, though he has oddly slanted eyes. I also have NO IDEA how his armor is supposed to work, sometimes it looks like there's trim in places, sometimes it doesn't. Apparently he has a cape, but just on the box? Give official art or portraits, IS please.
  13. A smaller turnout especially compared to the last few, but still cool entries!
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    Boops on a Canvas

    So she's nearly the same size as a cyclops? That just seems unreasonable, unless she's some sort of 8 foot tall monster, she should be closer to ephraim/eirika's height. Map sprites scale is less important than battle sprite scale, you shouldn't say that she needs to be huge because her map sprite is a bit bigger.
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    Boops on a Canvas

    That human battle sprite is REALLY big, like 1.5x larger than the standard human size. Also, the shoulders on that mug are nearly non-existant.
  16. THERE'S FORUMS OUTSIDE OF GENERAL?!

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    Toa's Sprites

    My hopes have been realized. Camille joins the GBA party! I might try to do more in her body put my screenshot of her portrait just has her body as a black mass. [spoiler=reference] I wasn't lying. I plan to do the Dark Knight looking guy next and then the little sister. Someone else can do Hoshido :P
  18. Even if color count doesn't matter for inserting it into a game, you should try to avoid spare shades.
  19. You don't need any spaces. Just copy that format, the quotes are necessary.
  20. I think you need a title [spoiler=title here] Like so:[spoiler=title here] you have the ending right.
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    Fate of Fire

    @Ghast: All the hacks @Matt It takes place on a fictional world, I'm fixing up my map to have a little more detail as we speak. Most names have been ripped off of Mediterranean locations. That tile is blowing my mind right now, I never saw it facing the other way at all O.o Time to fix some cliffs. @SHF23 Which portraits? I'm going to make some changes to the shamaness, but I thought the other ones were pretty good quality. Might also change which direction Perseus is looking, but eh.
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    Fate of Fire

    This is Fate of Fire, my hacking project that I've been working on and off on for a few months. I've done 4ish chapters, but they're really mostly just framework with a lot of glitches and missing dialogue. What's Planned: FoF will be pretty short, ~15 chapters with only 21 playable characters I lied it's fucking huge. New Maps! New Stories! New Characters! New Weapons! New... you get the idea. Plot: In the year 683, the Phoencian Empire invaded and annexed the Ithacan peninsula. In the agreement that ended the war, the Phoencian Emperor, Navar, agreed to allow the Ithacans to rule in their own way as long as they still answered to the call of the Empire. Navar died in 711, leaving the Empire to his sickly son, Vertuse. Vertuse was a largely ineffective ruler, losing Phoencia huge swaths of territory to the neighboring military giant of Tiberia. In 747, Vertuse would pass away, leaving the empire to his two sons, Noctus and Naethen. Noctus, as the eldest son, was given control of the mainland Phoencia, while Naethen was given control of Ithaca. Noctus was a calm and sage ruler, but his brother was far more tempered, and wished to prove his worth to the Imperial subjects as well as fix his father’s failures in the field of battle. He began to take more and more power from the Ithacan government. In 749, tensions reached a new high when the heir princess, Leto was arrested and slated to be executed as a display of total Phoencian power. This display of brutality would be the spark needed to light the fire of the Ithacan rebellion. [spoiler=screenshots] Big shout outs to eventiel, feditor, nightmare, event assembler, and all the other programs that make hacking so easy!
  23. Leo's head is really small and misshapen. Like it's a circle not an oval, and kinda lumpy too. His armor is also way too big for his head, looks like a child in an adult's armor.
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