Eltoshen

What I would be worried about is people just typing out, "You have won the blablabla contest". XD So you should probably have to PM the word to an administrator(but would it still be censored?).

The level of immaturity in this topic itself seems to be more than what I've been seen in some topics themselves. :X IMO, you should knock off the "LOL, I think I'm funny and can make fun of Lyle repeatedly just because he says I'm mean! xP" attitude. Especially since Lyle himself, the one who you're joking around with has asked you to stop. That's common courtesy. If he hadn't said anything about it, it would mean he didn't mind you doing such things. However, that isn't the case...

Gatrie isn't ugly, wtf. Anime girls with big, out of proportion heads are what I call ugly.

IMO, Kyosuke needs a bit more muscle. Right now, his arms seem to be as thin as Excellen's, lol. Broadening his shoulders might help. does this mean sanger is going to get full-bodied too? /hopeful

Are you sure? His had a conversation with Sety in chapter 8, but I forgot what was said. (that said, does anybody have the game script? I remember there was a site or file with everything written out)

I seem to never use Adan, Noish, or Alec. They're rather ugly characters and/or not pretty enough so I just shove them next to the castle.

It's too big. I'd hate seeing that all the time.

You would listen to a preteen drama?In any case, it's not the best idea to start off with a big "BOOM I'M HERE, AND I'M MAD!" You basically skipped the whole, "Now, wait up. Would you reconsider?"

Oh my god. The merge was the worst idea ever. >_> Shoo if you want to argue. The fact that people are actually arguing over something that's so simple is not interesting as all. Another suggestion: tone down on the words that end with "ck". It's not like everybody around here cares how much you like that sound.

Sure, I've been planning on checking out the other articles, too. :3 And as long as it's consistent, I think it's fine if you use present tense.

Summary: Eltosian lead the Cross Knights of Silvail. He was known to be a courageous man who followed his King, believing that it was his duty. However, he had a sister, Lachesis of Nodion, who he cared for deeply, so deeply that he considered reasoning with his king instead of fighting her during his last battle in Agustria. Heritage: Eltosian, being a descendant of Hezul, is able to wield the holy sword, Mistoltin. He and his wife, Grayne, care for their son, Aless. It is noted that Aless greatly resembles his father in appearance. Eltosian and Lachesis also have different mothers. At one point, Grayne brings Aless to Grayne's mother-in-law, on Lachesis' side, living in Lenster. Bio: Eltosian is first seen greeting Sigurd and Cuan when they passed through Verdane, implying that they held history with each other when they were younger. During the battle for Verdane, Eltosian helped fight off Elliot, who had came to take advantage of Grandbell by destroying Sigurd's army. When he got back to his country, however, the King had him detained for acting against his own allies. Six months later, King Shagall of Agustria ordered Eltosian to repel the Grandbell troops from Agustria to prove that he was loyal to the King. Eltosian followed his king's orders and attacked Sigurd's army. However, Eltosian refused to fight his sister, who was with Sigurd's army at the time, and hence went to convince King Shagall to reconsider. Before leaving, Eltosian left Lachesis with the Earth Sword. After failing to convince Shagall to call off the attack, the leader of the Cross Knights was branded a traitor and executed on the spot.

I've been rather bored lately and I think it'll be fun grading essayspeer reviewing stuff. It'll help my English grades too...hopefully, XD. I've been interested in writing an article on Eltosian though...

Yeah, the grammar's fine, Vincent. since you asked. I only have time to read a bit right now but... Ordered by bold(same for rest) 1: "of" should probably be "in" 2: Game titles should be underlined(unless you're not looking to be that tidy) XD 1 and 2: Usually, childhoods are in the past. Especially in this case, where the game takes place during his adulthood. (has->had) 3: Comma needed. 4: "most of his life" works better than "maybe the rest of his life" The second one seems to be opinionated while the first is a "fact" with leeway. 5: "peaks" not "peakes" 6: Just going to be simple and say that "Alvis becomes and orphan and"... sounds better(and may be more gramatically correct). 7: Typo 8: from->for 1: Typo, probably. XD 2: Comma is needed. 1st: There should be a comma where I bolded. It isn't just for a pause; it's grammatical. 2nd: When the commas are used for a pause in such a close interval of time, it doesn't become as effective. Since the first sentence (the one with the comma struck out) doesn't need the comma, it'll flow better without it. But then again...going on to the 3rd comma... 3rd and 4th: You actually need the commas here, so that ruins the "flow" I was talking about earlier. It's not a big deal, but it's worth mentioning. EDIT: You can't really see the commas so I made them red. EDIT 2: I went ahead and did bits and pieces of the rest. EDIT 3: I've noticed there's a lot of past tense, present tense disagreement, so I've ignored marking off each one. Basically, everything should be past tense.

Hey. XD Welcome.

Not really. Have you ever analyzed a book? There's always more than one way to look at every scenario or character.

That actually sounds quite interesting. You can otherwise view a member's name history in their profile for now, I think.

I still wonder how a person can even reach 5000 posts in such a short amount of time.

Shiida, rofl. I'll be laughing when I see that throughout this playthrough, XD.

That bee picture looks great in terms of contrast, though it is a bit creepy.

It's been a long time since I've seen you make anything... I still love the coloring.

Holy crap, my hero is here. :OOO

I remember your username, XD.

Also, banned members have Banned as their user group anyways. Back on topic: Gray is still rather light. :/ Could you possibly lift the shade a bit?

Interesting. I'll check out what Celice said as well. Thanks.

Uh...VBA doesn't extract layers from DS games since it can't load them. In case you didn't know, NO$GBA is a DS emulator as well as a GBA emulator.