Eltoshen

A post before mine confused me, : D

Sadly, you can't really argue about Holy Blood in general, since the game is rather flawed in that department. You just have to go with what's there. D8

I think there's a page on this already, and the ones you've listed are the generic ones that weren't added onto the list. :o

Yeah, Vincent changed it already. ;)

So Levail is taking Orson's place... :/ I feel bad for the dude. Always ending up on the wrong side. XD

I think you typo'd on the title. XD "sypnosis" -> "synopsis" I didn't read over everything, yet, but the first few lines are already really nicely written.

Those are actually pretty nice. I have one to share... Oguma and Navarre

Or maybe they didn't put Diadora's minor Loputo blood in to avoid plot spoilers. :o

Or...who knows. He willingly followed Greil, when he was younger, that is. Maybe he might eventually accept the ones Ike cared for as part of his family. He seemed to have gotten a bit better during the course of RD.

Sadly, I hate it when my characters are dead. Even for a second. >_> I might go and kill some people when Shadow Dragon comes out for the DS, though. 8D

Just have the Alster army seize Lenster. You can reseize it later. Drag Fin, Leaf and Nanna to the forests and you'll be fine. I never found it to be that troubling.

Just checking up on my little fe4 fellows...

I'd have to say...

Since everybody's doing it, I'll list off all the anime I've bothered to watch. Blood + Chobits Claymore Darker Than Black Gundam 00 Gundam Seed Gundam Seed: Destiny Full Metal Alchemist Naruto Noir Madlax Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles Vampire Knight xXxholic Kei I know there's a billion more, but I can't recall all of them. And of the ones still ongoing... Bleach Gundam 00 Second Season Kuroshitsuji (Black Butler) Naruto Shippuden Vampire Knight Guilty Ones that I've been watching lately... Gundam Wing Samurai Champloo

Sounds great. I'm looking forward to it.

It might seem interesting to battle against them, but it kinda makes the storyline feel childish if they were revived. :/

lol. fury...nobody likes her. :P slutchesis all the way.

It was implied in the brief moments after Mahnya gets shot down. Apparently, Levin had feelings for Mahnya. You could probably stick it in somewhere where you talk about Levin and Fury becoming lovers. Trust me, it is canon. aka... Blablabla, Levin had feelings for Mahnya, as revealed during her death. However, he would soon find himself in love with Mahnya's sister, Fury... Blablabla lol.

I'll be giving some suggestions and adding in a few things that might work. You don't have to use all of them. The ones I put in blue are grammatical, so you should definitely use those. Things in bolded red are my little ideas. -We can assume that the people know Grado is on Magvel. If you leave it there, it sounds cluttered. -When you put a pronoun before a title, you generally don't capitalize the next word. Either you put "their king, Vigarde" or simply "King Vigarde" -In purple: That needs to be rewritten. I can give you an idea of what to write, though. "When King Vigarde dies, Lyon becomes depressed and relies on the dark stone to revive his father. Sadly, he became possessed by the Demon King." Overall, there's still a lot of weird sentence breaks and jumps in the details. You should probably add some transitions. I don't want to change what you've been trying to say, so I didn't touch much of it. The first two sentences in the paragraph were quite confusing, so if I edited something different from what you wanted to say, please excuse me. Dx Regarding the "himself and other mages" phrase: It doesn't sound quite right. You can just remove "other mages" since it doesn't really add anything anyways. -"Knoll has also witnessed a glimpse future of Grado after the War of the Stones with Lyon before the war." What do you wish to say here? Lyon saw the future with him, or what? Because it doesn't sound quite right. 1. Should I focus a little more about the Dark Stone's background with Lyon and him? Depends. If it relates to Knoll's character, then maybe. 2. Should I create a better ending then the fact that he saw the future that Grado gets ruined? Did this occur before or after the Demon King was defeated by Ephraim and allies? I think you should remove the last two sentences since there isn't exactly a clear reason. Just conclude it with a summary of Knoll's life or personality.

http://www.feplanet.net/games-4-characters/108 Sigh... 18+20 is 38 skill. At this point in time, Levin doesn't even have Holsety yet. The higher your skill, the higher chance of a critical activating as well.

Did you miss the part where I mentioned Eltosian's skill? The mistoltin gives him +20 skill. That neutralizes Levin's +20 speed.

I kinda forgot my first playthrough. All I know is that Sylvia ended up stealing Levin from Fury. >_> I think I paired... AryaxHolyn AideenxMidayle BriggidxDew LachesisxBeowulf ClaudexTiltyu. That's what I remember, in any case.

Or you know, it was a genetic mutation. Those things happen. It would make sense for these rare cases to occur.

Obviously. Greil was around 40(?) when he died? Ike's still only 20-something in Radiant Dawn.

It'll OHKO you, so don't count on it. Eltosian's skill will give him a very high chance for a critical. That combined with the overly high attack of the Mistoltin > Holsety.