Eltoshen

Are there any? The only ones I seem to have been able to get are the ones in the opening demo. Just wondering if there were more, since I forgot. o-O The ones I have so far... http://s37.photobucket.com/albums/e53/Elto...hadow%20Dragon/ Yay! Finally found the rest on this site, rofl. Time to go make icons...

Sadly, Soren accidentally bled too much when he slit his wrists vertically, not horizontally. :(

Well, you were making a list, right? In that case, the sentence is grammatically correct. It basically means that the king, Alvis, and the Royal Guard are waiting for him. Oh yes, flaunt. Go dictionary.com it or something. It basically means: "3. to parade or display ostentatiously: to flaunt one's wealth. "

You can make up whatever dreams you have about Ike but that doesn't change the fact that he's been hiding in my bed this whole time. Lucia, on the other hand, kept her hair short and sexy. Geoffrey then had some incestual sex with said sister. :P rofl, this topic is win OH SHIT, CAN'T BELIEVE I FORGOT THIS. Gatrie and Shinon become lovers and pop some kids out of a hat. You can't deny this OTP!

A few rules wouldn't hurt, in any case. Seems like a simple rule to follow, as well.

Can I still review this? XD

Hot art. I downloaded more than half of them. I would post some, but they're all x-rated. :P

You guys are severely underestimating Shunsui. Have you guys not read the Turn Back the Pendulum arc? It stated that he, Unohana, and mister on-sick-leave are the only three captains who have been there from the start. I do think he will get rather slashed up and crap, though. Finally getting to see his bankai will be really nice as well. I do think that Yamamoto will die though, and the person above me stated the reason why perfectly.

Oh, you've shot one down. You just fail at killing the pilots.

Yay, I've been waiting to read this. You know the drill. Missing commas filled in, some moved around. I also changed the word order in a bit of it, as there were some subject-predicate errors. Now on to the next part. * You might want to put some sort of event here, for example: Roy kills Zephiel, instead of stating a chapter. As for other stuff, I get what you're trying to say, but it could be worded better. I tried giving my own opinions on how to do it in bolded red. *What exactly do you wish to say here? Until after the Battle of Barhara? Or do you mean when Sigurd is branded a traitor and goes with them to Silesia? If it's the former, there's fact inconsistency. If it's the latter, then it needs a little bit of editing. Also, you see where you said "gets in touch"? That generally means that you've met before, and you're meeting up again. In this case, I believe it's their first time meeting each other. You can't start sentences with "so" or "but", in case you were wondering why those were crossed out in this paragraph and the one before it. I'll basically let you finish writing this up with the new info that the people above have provided. Also, you should probably write a few lines about his love for Fury's sister(forgot her name...Mahnya?) and how he had feelings for Mahnya. I'll get to the rest of it eventually. Maybe by the end of today.

Oops, I accidentally typo'd when I edited. XD

lol, will you magically survive every gundam attack here as well?

Wouldn't a brown colored skin work nicely too, maybe? Considering Serene's "dead state" that it was put in for a long period of time.

Hope you don't mind me "peer editting"? I'll bold places where I changed it. And I'll just cross off the things that ruin the grammatical format. Eeep, I don't think Lyn was newborn when Kent, Sain, and Wallace were sent. Otherwise Kent and Sain would be around 5-6 year-old knights. o-O Are you sure this information is accurate, or is it just something added to make it flow better? I tried fixing a bunch of grammar mistakes and some things were inaccurate with the story. I believe Lyn wasn't an infant when she saw her mother and father for the last time, was she? Also, just a few things I'd like to note: -This seems more like a summary of her history, and it doesn't exactly describe her involvement in any of the story events that occurred during the game. -More descriptions about her character personality? -A line about her physical appearance and how Hausen stated that she resembles her mother might help.

Yes please. In that case, I'll hold off until the final draft. :3

XD Just a note: I go by "Eltoshen", not "Eltosian". It's weird, but we're two different people. Eltosian is a person from FEO.

I think the capability to use axes beats bows any day.

Yeah, XD.

I would probably like to write an article on Ike, but I definitely won't be able to finish it all in one day. Do you want me to save the copy until I get a decent amount of content before posting? Or should I just go ahead and start the topic with some simple stuff and expand from there?

Mist will lose the legendary nonexistent last name of Thee Ike after she pops out babies with Boyd. what the game designers forgot to tell you is that ike crawled into my bed after the events of fe10

I think he missed a word: more. Put it in between "It's" and "immature" and you'll get what he's been trying to say to you. ;)

HolynxArya anybody? I really love the Major Odo bloodand abusing a glitch will get Lakche or Skasher the Balmunk. Oh my, I love my Arya...

I expanded it a bit, and unless there's something more to add, I think this is the most I'm going to write. Thanks for the help guys, and if you see any inaccuracies, please tell me. XD

The pages are set up real nice, Vincent. I think I'm inspired to go and get to editting up the one I've been working on. XD

I'd actually greatly appreciate a readable copy of that(without all the extra weird folders and names).