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It's official: I hate writing battle scenes. I can't write any to save my life... *sigh*
I sat on this thing for the entire day now and I couldn't come up with anything. It's f***ing frustrating.
This entire day I could've spent doing literally ANYTHING else, wasted.

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Just now, DragonFlames said:

It's official: I hate writing battle scenes. I can't write any to save my life... *sigh*
I sat on this thing for the entire day now and I couldn't come up with anything. It's f***ing frustrating.
This entire day I could've spent doing literally ANYTHING else, wasted.

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*pats*

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6 minutes ago, Julian Teehee said:

If Tio wins, everyone who voted in the competition has to use a Tio avatar for one week.

If Tio loses, I will use a Camilla avatar for one week.

Does it sound good?

Tbh, I'm not sure if I'd want to change Dolce out for another character, especially since I just changed it a few days ago.

5 minutes ago, DragonFlames said:

It's official: I hate writing battle scenes. I can't write any to save my life... *sigh*
I sat on this thing for the entire day now and I couldn't come up with anything. It's f***ing frustrating.
This entire day I could've spent doing literally ANYTHING else, wasted.

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Sorry to hear that. I can imagine how irritating that would be.

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Just now, twilitfalchion said:

Sorry to hear that. I can imagine how irritating that would be.

Thanks, thanks!

30 minutes ago, Julian Teehee said:

If Tio loses, I will use a Camilla avatar for one week.

I decline for the sole reason that nobody should have to go through that kind of self-torture.
And also because I'm not sure I want to switch at the moment. Feeling pretty good with what I got.

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Just now, twilitfalchion said:

Agreed.

I mean, nothing against anyone who happens to like Camilla for one reason or another, but if you already hate her, having her be the face of your profile can't be a pleasant feeling.

If I had to use a picture of Otsuu as pfp even for an hour... Oof.

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Just now, DragonFlames said:

I mean, nothing against anyone who happens to like Camilla for one reason or another, but if you already hate her, having her be the face of your profile can't be a pleasant feeling.

If I had to use a picture of Otsuu as pfp even for an hour... Oof.

Or if I had to have a Sylvain or Kieran pfp, lol.

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I have an oath to stay with a Nep character

xD

33 minutes ago, DragonFlames said:

It's official: I hate writing battle scenes. I can't write any to save my life... *sigh*

yeah writing battles/fights are hard. Especially in 3rd person. It's why i write them in first person when i do them

but i still try to not write fight scenes lel

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1 minute ago, Shrimperor said:

yeah writing battles/fights are hard. Especially in 3rd person. It's why i write them in first person when i do them

And I'm trying to write them in the second person, which, as it turns out, doesn't make it any easier, either.
The opposite, rather.

2 minutes ago, Shrimperor said:

but i still try to not write fight scenes lel

Yeah... with the setting and premise I'm using, avoiding them is practically impossible.
Not that I haven't tried. XD

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4 minutes ago, DragonFlames said:

Yeah... with the setting and premise I'm using, avoiding them is practically impossible.

Try maybe something like these

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I face them, the enemies infront of me

Their numbers are huge, but so are ours

In the battle, many will fall

but even then

I can't give up. If it's to protect my home, my loved ones, i will slay all the enemies infront of me

And so...

''Charge!'' I order my army.

I raise my Sword...

and the armies clash

i know it's bad but it's how i would start an army vs. army scene, as an example xD

 

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1 minute ago, Shrimperor said:

Try maybe something like these

Hmm, yeah I think I can try that.
Thanks for the help, Shrimpy! ^^

4 minutes ago, Shrimperor said:

i know it's bad but it's how i would start an army vs. army scene, as an example xD

I actually thought that was pretty good.

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14 minutes ago, Shrimperor said:

 

i know it's bad but it's how i would start an army vs. army scene, as an example xD

 

Read Robert E. Howard’s Kings of the Night if you want inspiration for writing a battle scene.

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